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Jayne33
Over 90 days ago
Straight Female, 41
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Sneaking up and giving you a squeeze - Happy Birthday!!!!!
Happy Birthday!!! Wishing you a super sexy day, for one of my favourite authors on Lush. (Even if you don't release work that often - quality over quantity... and yes it is quality)

Massive hugs
Jayne x
Think I've got a problem...

...need a bigger closet!


Congratulations all!!!

I was hoping for Emelia to win (even though I haven't managed to read them all and I, myself also entered, but her story was miles better), so I'm so glad she placed top three!!!
I've dabbled a little... smirks... okay, that's putting it lightly.

I'd probably define myself largely as a toker - having smoked weed pretty much daily since I was 16. I know it's not for everyone and doesn't effect everyone the same way, but I've never really had any issues. I've pulled a few whitey's in the early days, but that's usually because I tried smoking after being pissed (if I drink and smoke at the same time I'm fine, but not if I try smoke after already being pissed)

I think whitey's are largely in the mind and you can talk yourself round and prevent them from happening with a bit of concentration.

I spent many a happy year taking pills (back when you only needed one to last all night) dancing the night away. I think E and MDMA is a brilliant experience for the mind at least once in your life. It opens something up and makes you look at the world different.

I've only ever had a bad time on pills once. We'd driven out of town to a D&B club, but I think the pills were cut with something and I was proper smacked out. I couldn't move and ended up asking my friends to cut the night short and take me home. I was alright by the time we got back, I think being in the safety of my home made it easier to cope with.

I haven't taken anything else, unless you count the time a girl at work spiked my coffee with speed on morning break. She'd been trying to get me to take it with her for ages, but I wouldn't touch the shit, as it's a dirty cheap drug that just gives you jaw ache and a shit stomach.

I stopped the pills a few years ago when the comedown outweighed the high.

I've seen too many friends turn into knobheads taking coke, so I never touched it.

I think Steph's point that it should be legal is correct, that way it can be regulated and out of the hands of the criminal world.

My thought on drugs has always been - if it doesn't have a negative effect on yours or others life, then there's no harm in it.
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I think audio recording is a totally different discipline to writing. You can't simply READ the piece, there has to be a considerable element of acting involved. Like a real actor, one has to FEEL the character... And then SELL it.

Some people here do this pretty well, (Mazza, Shylass and Jeff Verbal spring to mind, there are others...)

However, I've never heard ANYONE here read as well as Jayne 33. She seems to immerse herself in the character and has no qualms about fully exploring every nuance of word, expression and indeed sound. This is something that takes trained actors YEARS to learn. To be able to do it as naturally, as seemingly un-selfconciously as Jayne does is evidence of an amazing natural talent. (And indeed a considerable bravery...)

To combine this with the editing in of another voice, various sound effects etc. (as this piece does) and to do this FLAWLESSLY, indicates, in my opinion, a considerable 'raising-of-the-bar' of audio presentations on LS.

Of course, it would be remiss to ignore the fact that in order to produce this kind of piece the SCRIPT has to be of top quality... (it has to be, as actors say, 'on the page...') Here, thanks to Jaymal's skill as a writer, it is. (His voice-acting here too is superb...)

Not everyone, (including myself, alas...) has the talent or skill to produce an audio piece of this quality. As well as evidencing the talent of the creative duo involved, I feel almost certain that the very nature of Lush Stories as a creative/collaborative/involving site encourages such talent to explore, to experiment, to go further in their creativity. ("If we build it, they will cum!!!")

This piece is an example of what can happen here and ONLY HERE given the talent and space that is uniquely Lush Stories.

Well done to both artists.

xx SF



I totally agree and think it's a brilliant point to say that Lush stories is brilliant at nurturing writers and helping them explore. Without Lush I would have never found the enjoyment I get from writing, nor would I have had the confidence to start producing audios.

It's always been my personal goal to try and produce the next level of standard of audio story. I take time thinking about it, put a lot into recording and editing, (to the point that I have physical scars, but that's another story) so to get this sort of feedback makes all those hours worth it.

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I'm a huge fan of Jane's work. I've waited patiently for this story and I have to tell you it was worth the wait. Both her voice and Jaymal's voice together take you on a thrilling and very sexual rollercoaster ride. In my opinion, Jane's accent is very sexy and I enjoy her storytelling. This quite possibly is her best audio work to date. If you haven't read/listened to her, start with this story and then go through her entire collection. If you want a really exciting author to follow.....Jayne is my personal favorite female writer on Lush Stories.

If you haven't had a chance to listen to this very sexy and incredibly hot tale...take it from me you won't be dissapointed. It's clearly one of the sexiest, filthiest and dirty audios on Lush. That's a compliment for sure. Our favorite audio queen Jayne and teamed together with Jaymal who also is an award winner on Lush Stories will give you a mind orgasm.

Kudos to you both. A wonderfully acted audio and highly entertaining story. Congrats to the two of you....I'm definitely going to be checking out Jaymal's library as well. I see he wrote this fabulous and tasty morsel. I see he also has a few ebook's that are worth checking out. I'm excited to pick through his library as well.

Hugs,
Mysteria
Xo


Thank you so much for your wonderful comments here and on the story. I truly do appreciate your kind words!
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I believe it's been mentioned before, but I'd love to see co-authored stories appear on the profile page/stories list of each of the authors, as well as have the new story notifications go to those following each author.

I recently had the pleasure of co-authoring a story with Brandylady53 which was subsequently awarded a recommended read. We had agreed to post it under my name with her listed as co-author, because the original germ of an idea was mine, but she deserves to have that RR blue thumb on her page every bit as much as I do - maybe more! We both worked equally hard on it, and although it should only appear once on the front page, category page or archive, it should be credited to and link from both profiles in my opinion. I suspect that others who have enjoyed co-authoring stories feel the same.

It seems only fair.


I have also just Co - authored an audio story with Jaymal and think it would be much more fair if he got more visible recognition for his part in the story. I don't know enough about the techie side of things to know if it would be hard to code another member in so they have a more recognizable co-author? (showing on their story list as well, maybe dual avatar on home page list)

I was going to come on and suggest that at the very least could the co-auhor get notifications on their time line to let them know about scores, comments and such like?
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Jayne33


Thank you for mentioning me amongst the other talent writers in your list.
Quote by Coco
This is on my list... I must read/listen to this tonight! Two of my favorites in one sizzling combination...whew I can't wait.


Hopefully we don't disappoint and you enjoy it as much as you anticipate.
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Thank you!!!

I was worried that my audio wouldn't do justice to Jake's super sizzling hot writing, but I've been thrilled with the response it's been getting.

We really appreciate you taking the time to listen/read! So glad you enjoyed it.

*Happy Dance*
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A great story and sizzling sexy audio! This story has been awarded a Recommended Read.


Coming from another one of my favourites, super talented authors that means a lot.

Really glad you enjoyed it.
I wanted to promote my new audio because I'm super proud of it.

I've been working to keep improving my audios and make them the best I possibly can.

When the opportunity to work with my favourite Lush author Jaymal came up I was honoured and super excited.

Sadie's Confession is the story of a married woman fighting a losing battle with the office lothario who seduces her. Listen to her confess her secrets of her giving into her slutty, cheating ways.

Sadie's Confesssion

Massive hugs to you all

Thank you so much for all the wonderful Birthday wishes. I've not been around as much of late, so it means all the more that you would take the time to think of me.

Mega Happy Birthday Wishes to the super talented, gorgeous, funny and intelligent Liz!!!

It's a joy to share my birthday with you.
Congratulations to the top three. All exceptional writers and such great talent.
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What I like about the standard is here is that it forces me as a writer to aim high with my writing.


^This Exactly^

I wouldn't be half the writer I am today without the guidance of the moderating team, helpful friends and the examples of brilliant writing that can be found on this site.

I owe this site not only for giving me plenty of brilliant stories to read, but for helping me find something I love. It's helped me learn basic writing skills and pushed me to learn correct grammar.

I now strive to keep improving in the hope that I produce the best work I can.
Thank you so much!!!

I'm super happy to have placed top three. It's taken a lot of hard work, but I've finally got a yellow ribbon!!

Massive congratulations to Raven and Gil. And to everyone that entered. It feels like so much more of an achievement knowing the standard of competitors. I love so many of the great authors that entered, so it means so much.

Eeekkk!!!! So Happy!
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These are the notifications that go away almost as quickly as they appear:

1. Someone posted on your wall.
2. Someone sent you a private message.
3. Someone voted/commented on your story (I'm not too sure about this one so someone else may have to confirm).
4. Someone on your friends list has logged on.

You also get a notification when someone pokes you, but as with the black boxes, they don't go away unless you either manually close them yourself, reply, or refresh/navigate away from the page.

One of these things must have occurred. So check your profile (or your timeline) for new wall posts or to see if you've been poked. If you're an author, check for new comments or scores.



This doesn't happen, but all the others are spot on.

As others have said a box that disappears without a trace (no sign of post on your profile, message in inbox, or record of chat in online chat in messages) then it's most likely a friend signing in.


Happy Birthday you super sexy man. I really hope you have the special day you deserve.




Hmmm??? Going to have to think carefully about this one. I like a good challenge though.

*Edit*

I've got it and started writing. I'm excited about this one.
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Excellent stuff Jayne! That was impressive smile

Very clear and in sure it'll encourage lots of people to submit audios of their stories!


Thanks for all the feedback.

I'm thinking that my next tutorial will be on how to record and edit the audio, but it might take me a little while to get it made.
I've seen a few members ask how they submit an audio story to Lush, so I've made a tutorial on how to upload.

Hopefully, you find it helpful.

Happy Birthday Milik!!!

You're a truly talented writer and I respect your skills immensely. It's always a pleasure to read your work and I was honoured to get the opportunity to collaborate with you. I really hope that you get past the tough times and get back to a happy place real soon.

Massive hugs

Massive congratulations to the top three and everyone who got a mention, as well as anyone who entered.

It's always an honour to compete with such fantastic writers.
Hope you have a brilliant day!!!



Big Birthday Hugs Sexy Lady
Happy Birthday Sweetie. Hope you have a great day. Massive Hugs x