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Secrets

"About to be revealed"

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The conference was dull but got better when he put his hand on my leg, rubbing my stocking-clad thigh, I didn't protest because I was enjoying it, but I gave him no sign!

He slowly worked his hand tentatively up my skirt, and it was all I could do to not smile.

He's going to remember every second once he feels what's waiting for him. The question is will he like what he finds? I feel myself getting firm at the thought. I wonder what I might be able to talk him into later if he doesn't get scared off?

 

 

 

 

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Unknown User
Perfect Show & Tell drabble
Thanks Dave!
Got your reply and remember that show and scene. Love it! What's next??
I don't know, she hasn't said yet. I am curious as well!
Way to leaving us hanging- pun intended! Can't wait for his reaction.
I know, I wonder just what he will do. Do you remember The John Larroquette Show? It wasn't very PC, but I remember a scene where one of the characters unknowingly picked up a transsexual woman. The final scene was a show where the camera was behind her, just showing her panty-covered hip with him facing her with a look of anticipation on his face. As she dropped her panties you saw the look change to shock. I always wondered what happened next, did he run away or embrace the opportunity.
Brilliant. Just brilliant. xxx
Thanks Monica. It was a fun one for me
One beauty of a drabble is the power to set the scene...and then leave the reader to work out what happened next. This is a perfect example of that style.
I have never heard it referred to as a Drabble, to me that was always a somewhat funny comic strip. Thanks for the education! I am glad you thought so as well.
Didn’t see that coming! Great job.
Well, not just yet. Maybe later, she hopes :-) Thanks Midnite
That started out sexy and turned to funny, what a great turn of events in such a short story. The title could just as easily have been 'Surprise!' but that might have spoiled the surprise. Great little story!
I bounced several names around, and decided on Secret because up until his hand reaches a certain point, I bet it was! Glad you liked it! Thanks WnW
The Queen of the Twist!!! Great micro, Brooke <3
Why am I hearing Chubby Checker music in the background? Thanks Kimmie!
good as always and a delightful twist
Thanks Alan, you know how I like to surprise folks once in a while.
Oh yes!!!! Of course I find this delicious! Thank you for writing this one Brooke. xxx
Thank you Kaylee! It was a fun one!
Excellent, the little twist that makes your story special. Well done, Brooke.
Twist, why do you always think I have . . . oh, I guess I often do! :-) Thanks Chas
This was a decadent little read! Brilliant writing!
Thanks Kat! I recall a dirty cartoon where a guy tried this with a girl and found a mousetrap :-)
You have such a delightful mind, I want a part two, when the realisation Dawns or more correctly Michael’s
I don't know about a sequel here, leaving it like this makes the mental imagery head in so many possible directions! LOL, thank you Fluttered.
I know a woman who took the same journey of discovery once. She said it all worked out quite nicely in the end.

Delicious as always, Brooke
I'm glad it worked for her. I recall a meeting where a woman just up and slapped the shit out of the guy next to her for trying to take liberties. He was a shit and was gone the next day! Thank you Kistin!
Mischievous Brooke, deliciously mischievous. It could easily turn in to a mind expanding experience ..... and I hope it does ?
Thanks Graham, either that or a mind-blowing one :-)
I wonder the same thing. I know I'd love it.
I hope they both like the answer :-) Thanks Gerry
Your story gives new meaning of "Don't ask, Don't tell." Also leads you to ponder the saying of "Life consists of hard choices." Or "The women get better looking at closing time." Too much alcohol dulling the senses?
Too much alcohol puts me to sleep . . . and it doesn't take much. I am such a lightweight! I think someone is going to face a hard choice and very soon :-) Thanks MeaganAnne
Seek and you shall find. However what you find might not might not be what you seek. (ke) Liked the twist. :)
Absolutely! But you also never know until you . . . look :-) Thanks Chris
Naughty thoughts come to mind! I love it. Thanks for sharing.
Good, I love nasty thought! Thank you!
Secrets definitely revealed with hard decisions to be made. Another fun micro
Thank you Hannah! So we know her hidden nature, how about his? LOL!
You really know how to spark up a story! Good read, Thanks Brookell!
Thanks DM, I think something will spark for sure!
The Lady or the Tiger! Raow! What a clever twist – if that's not the wrong slang to use in this situation! Well done, Brooke!
ROFL, I love that story! I wonder if the odds are more 50-50 or what? LOL. Thanks James
There will certainly be a story to tell! Maybe even more than one. Great job, Brooke. :)
Thanks for the approval and also the sweet comment. I'm trying to figure out what he will do! That's the fun of micros, so many different possibilities.