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Soulless story; pointless poem

"A story about fucking? A lover who only fucks? What's the fucking point?"

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You fuck me using all your skill but it's

A soulless story. Where's the slick denouement? 

Where's the clever ploy? You leave me full of 

Empty joy; a salad feast replete with

Colour, crispness, salty mayonnaise

These weighty days of famine how I crave 

A beast with flesh that drips with tasty tallow

Flows with primal energy for me

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My mouth you fill with meat and drink I do

And think I don't; you're showing off, the science

And all you are is nought, an egg, un ouef 

That's not... a shell that's blown and flown, the coup

De grace is absent, bird of paraplegic

Numbness, dumb and sum-less, showering me

With piss and cum lest I should see behind

The false façade and view my lover true

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You tease me with a tongue so deft, my oozing

Cleft, bereft of feeling feels a nothing

So complete, a pointless poem without 

A twist, description overflows but where's

The reason save for fleeting bliss? A kiss, 

A rose, would be as sweet... a poem with purpose

Or a story with a soul your goal should

Be. You write for you and not for me

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Written by Alexandra_A
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Comments

Very raw, and hot I like it
Enjoyed the pointless poem, sex flowing poem. 5
Ah tis a pointless poem, but very true.oft times we write but our hearts and souls are not in it. It is the same with the rest of our lives. Very well done. Again an exercise in choosing words and weaving them to tease and tantalize. Thank you.
This one brought a smile to my face. Well done.
Slick and cutting....

Well done.