Construction65, I would be glad to help you. If I might ask, what reason was given for returning your stories? I have helped edit a couple of April601's stories. I do some subject specific technical writing and have being doing my own editing. If the stories are being rejected for pushing the guidelines too hard I'll try to suggest ways of backing off enough to be acceptable. The stories that appear here is more than porn stroke material. The storyline here are amazing and are works of art that contain erotica. Why don't you pm me and we can arrange to chat.