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The Big Bang

"to know and be known"

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tonight I feel your hands
touching my face
touching my breasts
touching my very heart.

you have no idea
the gift you give me
as you show me your true self
as you seek to see my true self.

the orgasm is something beyond
mere physical reaction
and the spasm of muscles
and the rush of wetness.

it is an explosion
of life
and belonging
and forever.

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Written by LauraLee_sugah
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Comments

short, erotic, and to the point. Loved it...
Excellent!
gift wrapped?Under the covers.
Ahhh .. I like that, .. a lot. I want to (will) take you there .. with words.
Really great, very hot!
It's so beautiful and wonderful to be able to experience another realm through the power of an orgasm. You capture the miracle of ecstacy, the gift of being known through the giving of oneself. It reminds of the line from Shakespeare's The Tempest..."Ah brave new world that hath such wonders in it."
Everything everyone has said here plus some...... you have a gift indeed
Erotic raw sex.I always love it as well!
Beautiful poem. You turning into a wonderful poet darling. Exceptionally beautiful expression, diction and poetic form. You great Sugah. 5
bravo!!
excellent
Totally erotic..plays music to my ears..You have a rare style..unlike all others..Impressive & eloquent..((look over here Mods))..A Yellow Ribbon needed..!!!
Raw, sexy, I can see you closing your eyes craving for that touch. Impressive piece worth a 5.
Makes me want an orgasm.. hmmmm.. wonder who's around? lol.. very nicely done Sugah..
It is rare and refreshing to see writing that simply gets exponentially better (not that it wasn't good to start out) with each posting. The clarity and focus is impressive. The expression that comes through so clearly is beautiful. Simplicity coupled with depth. A definite "5".
This is fucking stunning...