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It was Just My Imagination

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I heard the door close today. 
A soft sigh of air pushed aside. 

You, home with me after all this time.

The water in my bath shimmered.
Droplets cascaded over out thrust breasts as I shifted, 
Longing to feel your touch along my flank. 

Did the floor creak? 

A pillow of rainbowed soap bubbles lathered, 
In swaths I scraped the surface clean. 

Why did I sense you here?
You’d never been to this place. 

I could hear your voice, its siren call I could not help but heed. 
Echoes floated in the steam, or was it fantasy? 
I saw you there in the room beyond. 

“Baby, come here,” I wished to say, 
But remorse grips my tongue yet today.
Inconsidered words in different days, 
Strewn about with careless ease, 
Taught the silence that crushes now. 

Peace gained at too great a price. 

You were here, I swear it so.
My exile redeemed, restitution for a debt now paid. 
Don’t leave me here like this

With just my imagination.

*special thanks to both Jayne 33 and Mazza for all you did to help with the audio*

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Written by Dirty_D
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Comments

Beautiful and full of emotion.
This was a beautiful and lovely poem. It was very sensual. 5
Really lovely poem, very emotional and beautiful. Your audio was well done and you could feel the emotion in your words. I know it's hard, but I'm so glad you submitted it! Let us hear more! x
Silly girl, I think you have a wonderful voice. I found the poem to very sad, but sweet at the same time. You did wonderful with it.
Very beautiful. It really struck a cord with me.
Very powerful. Loved the visualization, its like I could see you in the bath.
A brilliant poem in itself, but then add your gorgeous voice to it and it makes it perfect. Thank you so much for sharing. Easy 5+++
Great poem,,, it takes a strong person to write about something that seems so painful...
This really struck a nerve; for several years after my wife and I separated, I experienced similar imaginings.
Oh wow. I actually thought this was going to be just a light and sexy bathtub poem at first glance but you took it to a whole other level! I loved the way you captured the intense longing in this and the complexity of emotions. There are so many layers woven with just a few words. Really beautifully done!
Powerfully visual and descriptive. 5
Wonderful, imaginative and lovely
Very nicely captures something I'm sure many of us have lived through. 5++
A very touching and beautiful poem! Outstanding!
excellent poem!
Lovely writing nn, easy to imagine, to be unsure...
Thank you for sharing xx
Beautiful, woman.
That was such a visual experience. Filled with longing and sensuality. The verse flows beautifully as well. Wonderfully done.
I enjoyed reading the poem. It created a very real imaginary time and place, we all have dreamed and then been brought back to reality, this poem was living and documenting the feelings
Beautiful descriptions
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Beautiful, my friend. This was a powerful and real and I love it.
Like sprite said...the imagery really is so well rendered it brings the whole atmosphere of the poem to a very palpable level. And who couldn't recognize themselves in exactly the same place? Beautifully done...this is one to be thankful for.
this made my heart hurt.
Excellent. You evoke a sense of time and place with few words, and great emotion.
Imagination, visualization or even hallucination; whatever, but so powerful. 5