Gypsy by day with a timid sun,
Hidden in the clouds,
Gypsy by day with a hoarse sound,
Like a sad song,
The rain that lashes the streets,
The heart that can't stand the pain,
Away from you my life is empty,
A scared child in the dark,
Gypsy by night with a lowered light,
In a melted candle,
Gypsy by night with a naked dream
and a broken kiss,
The tears that lash the streets,
The heart that can't stand the pain,
Away from you my life is empty,
A frightened child in the dark,
The tears that lash the street,
The heart that can't stand the pain pains,
Dimitri
A lovely poem. Best of luck
I like your well-chosen repeating lines which served to deepen the emotions I was feeling while reading your poem. Best wishes in this competition! 😊
Thank you Kim
A deep expression of emotions that needs healing…
Powerful expression of the pain we have all felt at times.
This is very sad but also very beautiful. I hope you do well
Thank you fillelapine
Very nice poem for this competition best of luck
Thank you Anna
Beautiful work x
Thank you
Nice one Dimitri. Heartfelt and vividly told. "The tears that lash the streets" is a powerful image. Well done my friend.
Damn I was pulled in great Hun!❤️
Thank you my bird of paradise
The imagery is beautiful. Good luck. X
Thank you sweetheart
A wonderful poetry that expresses the darkness of loneliness so clearly. Well done and good luck in the comp.
Thank you very much