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Thanks, everyone for your replies, I have found them both helpful and informative. I suspect you will hate the sequel. It is more of the same but with fewer stage directions. Yes, Storm, you will need to bring your brain along cos even entertainment requires an active audience. And, I just love finding ways to bring hi-brow stuff into my smut. Sort of underlines our basic instincts as being nothing new. Mr. Shakespeare and Lewis Carroll have been given a gurnsey, Dylan Thomas is on the bench and AA Milne (gay & food fetish) Kenneth Graham (cross-dressing) are in the change room (pun intended). And what smut would be complete without Geoffery Chaucer and John Dunn? A couple of horn dogs if ever I met one. So, hold on to your hats, or any other piece of apparel of your choice, this ride is just beginning. Where Rory and Molly take us is anybody's guess.
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Felix and Jonathon, Thanks for your comments and your perspectives about reads. Obviously, as a Rookie Scribe, I'm new to these parts. I chose the title for its double meaning; a kids pass time and an occupation, as in she/he's on The Game. I'm halfway through a sequel which in part revolves around another kid's game. Whether there will be more depends upon my ability to find an interesting way for adults to subvert kid's innocent past times.
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Green Man, thanks for your input. I have commented on a couple of people's stories. Unfortunately, I don't have a lot of free time to hang out on Lush, spit, spit. My life is kinda busy, what with work, writing, and living/observing. So I will be patient and try to find time to read more here. Again, thanks for your advice.
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Aw, HRS where's the fun in that. I admit it does require a close read and even then it can get a little confusing. But, hey, the best nookie can be confusing, knowing where one person ends and the other begins. When you are that close... From my experience, there is much more in life than earth-shattering climaxes. For me, it is connecting with people. Hence, I try to develop characters and show how their personalities inform their experiences. Consequently, I try and show things rather than tell them. But, many thanks for your feedback, it is muchly appreciated.
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366 reads, 0 comments, and 0 votes. The reaction to my latest story, The Game. Is it that boring? confusing? unfinishable? I've had feedback from private sources and it has been laudatory. "It made me horny" was a typical response. But here, not even a "this story sucks" and a reason/s why. Is this level of disinterest an unusual response from Lush readers?
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Thanks everyone. Fog43 I tried my after shave and it tasted like a sour cantaloupe (I think, I'm not a great fan of melons). Kinda wondering if Coco's fragrance is more customer friendly. HA73 if its sweet it will change the story's direction, not necessarily a bad thing, but its handy to know where I'm headed and why.