Loneleygirl68's Forum Posts

1 Apr 2017

hmmm...think you could handle me?

14 May 2016

Does anyone know if there are Mods on SS today? I submitted a poem 5-6 hours ago and it still hasnt posted? Or did they all take the night off? Just curious is all...Thank you!

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16 Jan 2016

I swear I am a woman. And I am not a man pretending to be a woman..thats just silly..be who you are, dont pretend to be someone else.

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8 Nov 2015

Aisle- Lease

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10 Oct 2015

Above

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4 Aug 2015

I want to play...can I play?

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4 Aug 2015

Quote by MarinaC
I checked mine in my luggage. If they aren't electronic at all, then I wouldn't think they would stop or question it in anyway. If it's got a wire, like an egg, they might look into your bag. If for some reason they do search your bag, just own it! At that point, that's the best you can do. Grin and go on about your business. I'm sure you aren't the first woman to go through security with a toy and you won't be the last.

I figured I might try " I am on my way to shoot a porno in Vegas, they told me to bring my favorite toys..."

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2 Aug 2015

I am taking a flight soon and am not checking any bags, just a carry on and my purse. Any suggestions on how to discreetly pack my "personal friends"? Thanks for any and all advice!!

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1 Aug 2015

Hello Lush friend..
your reign must end,
for it is now my time to hold the crown...
Can't keep a Sexy woman down...

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29 Jul 2015

thinking this is a fun topic... I have even crafted a poem entitled I Am..but it isnt fun...so I wont subject you all to it..

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27 Jul 2015

trying to post a story, when hitting submit, sends me to search page? anyone else getting this?

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20 Jul 2015

Quote by LaylaJune

I know what you mean about number of readers - that was why I established a presence here.

I was here first, but another friend suggested I join there as well. I just am not there as often. I am also not sure where, over there I would post it, as in what category. Also thought about pulling first one down and combining them, but not sure if that would work either, each has a different rhythm and tone.

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20 Jul 2015

Quote by HeraTeleia
Did you ask the moderator/verifier who rejected your piece exactly why it was rejected, and how to change it to better conform to Lush standards? Rejections generally come with an explanation of the reason behind the rejection, and sometimes suggestions on how to change it to meet Lush standards. The mods/verifiers are generally very willing to help out.

Yes I did, and was specifically told that it did not fit the love poem category because it was not Romantic. I also asked the mod to read the first part Enigmatic Shadow, so they could see how this one was a continuation of sorts. The reply was that the first one fit because it was "abstract" this one did not.

I then suggested that perhaps if Romantic love poems were what was wanted then they might consider re-naming the category to Romantic Love Poems, instead of simply Love Poems. To that I did not receive a response.

I feel that love is a general term..there is romantic,tragic,sweet...I could go on and on

Thank you for responding, I appreciate your time!

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20 Jul 2015

Quote by BDSMBarbieDoll

I think that you did beautifully.

Thank you I appreciate that!!

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20 Jul 2015

Quote by LaylaJune
I am a little surprised it was rejected - it seems to qualify as a love poem to me, but I don't make the rules. If I am correct, I believe you have a presence on the "blue" site where I am sure it would be accepted.

It is a little creepy, stalkery (I almost thought it was about a dog following a kid home), but overall, I think it is well-written.

Thanks, yes I am on the other site as well. It just doesn't get as many readers. As a stand alone its ok, it just makes more sense if the other part is read first. I never actually intended for the first to have a second. I wrote this one after the fact. I appreciate your time to read and comment. Thanks LJ

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20 Jul 2015

This poem is the second part of one that was published to the site on 7/17/15 called Enigmatic Shadow

enjoy, and comment if you would like. Personally I think it should have been allowed to be published....

Enigma Resolved

Not quite content
To wait anymore
I gathered my things
Followed you out the door

Down the road you went
Strolled at a leisurely pace
If noticed following
I’d have had a red face!

Around the corner
Just up ahead you stopped
If I’d noticed a minute later
I would have been caught

Following just a bit slower
My heart still beating quick
I wonder where you are going
Will knowing do the trick?

Waiting for you to tell me
Where this ‘friendship’ will go
Is driving me absolutely crazy
I really must needs know

Up ahead you finally stop
At a house in the middle of a row
You fumble a bit with a key
Then in the door you go

The windowpanes are shuttered
The curtains are all drawn
I am out of luck to see in
A fence around the neat lawn

Huffing out an exasperated sigh
I sit down upon the curb
I followed you for nothing
Because I don’t dare disturb

I failed to notice
The door opening again
Suddenly there is a shadow
Damn! Its caught I’ve been!

What are you doing here?
Did you actually follow me?
All that I could do
Was nod my head yes in honesty

I asked you to be patient
For just a little while more
Why did you have to follow me
To my mother’s door

I really wish you hadn’t
Gone and followed me here
Lovers or Friends
The answer is now clear

If had you been patient
Its lovers it would have been
But without the most basic trust
I can’t even consider you a friend

Please take your leave now
Don’t contact me anymore
Lose my telephone number
Do not darken my mother’s door

I stood up, looked you in the eye
Desperately trying to apologize
You shook your head and turned away
I had actually ruined things I realized

With no chance I turned and left
Returning from whence I came
Neither lover nor friend now
I’ve only myself to blame

In trying to solve the mystery
That was the enigmatic shadow man
I missed a chance at true love
Now, always alone I am doing the best I can

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