Such a fun competition! Loved getting to read new work from my favorite writers and new ones. Congrats you guys!
The first time was actually kinda mid- or post-head, when he was about to come in her mouth/face as he was jacking off. Then it happened solo and happened a couple more times as he's experimented with it. Now he's found it's better when he edges rather than to go straight to it. idfk lol
Thanks for the weigh-in, Will! I was wondering if it was kind of the same for everyone or for all the dudes that have them, but I guess it's different for everyone, wow.
If I (or he) knew what happened, I'd recreate it! It started like most normal vanilla sex in the bedroom and turned quickly to orgasm... but even when it was over and he'd pulled out I kept orgasming. I remember vaguely wondering if I was going to be stuck that away but I was too far gone to care lol. I've had some insane orgasms, but that's the only one that kept going after dick was gone.
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If you want to stop abortions, you need to prevent the ‘disease’ - meaning, unwanted pregnancies and the only way to do that, is by focusing on men, because: MEN CAUSE 100% OF UNWANTED PREGNANCIES.
baby girl, don't hate the dick. I love sex and damn the dick in me better too, but failed birth control is also a thing. (though, fuck. you'd think there'd be man birth control besides condoms and sterilization by now, wtf Science?)
The supreme court was the last area of the united states government I thought still held hope for its people. I'll take another beer, please. This is bullshit.
I'm with Ensorceled on this if that's how you want to go, but because I'm an asshole I'd encourage you to describe the bang to paint the scene better. Anything can bang--pots falling on tile or each other, whatever, but it all sounds different. A reader can infer, yeah, but great descriptions that bring an effortless, living scene to your reader are memorable.
Feel free to ignore me though! :P I know every writer and every piece is different. Do what feels right.