This is my first poem and only my second submission to lust hope you enjoy it and give me advice to better myself. The poem didn't start out focused on a specific person but since I started it before we got to talking but it may have changed directions after talking.Again I hope you enjoy.My heart hurts with pain and sorrow Not knowing about the days of tomorrow Tonight you will be here with me The future just too blurry...

So this is my first story hope you enjoy it, please comment and give me pointers, advice and anything else you can think of. Much appreciated enjoy the story. I crossed and uncrossed my legs repeatedly, watching as the clock slowly ticked away. The countdown to end the torture of math class was on. The teacher’s voice seemed to drone on and on. I tensed as the last minute ticked by BRIIINNNG. I was the first one up and ou...