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The Trail

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They'd leave his body behind soon. She snuck into his lone wagon to place a cold cloth upon his head. 

They whispered things they could never tell another soul. Soon enough, he took his final breath, a soft silent gasp. She placed a single kiss on his forehead where the fever seemed to have burned his very soul out. She already missed him inside her, filling her with life.

She left, crying quietly in the darkened morning, valleys stretching eternal. She'd return to her wagon and sleeping husband, who would never know the man she loved for years was gone.

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Written by elliotlacey31
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So much in so few words. :) Lovely work.
? I bow to your greatness ?
A whisper of truth from days gone by. Acceptance of sad and terrible death of a dearly beloved. So much to imagine and wonder from such a small story. Full of enough hints to keep the imagination going. First child? Can she hold up and act stoic? Or is there a hole in her heart never to be filled? Who will the child look like? Wonderful job Elliot.
It would be interesting to know how many children she has.
Wow..that last line ❤
An epic novel in 100 words. Just wow, Elliot! <3
Damn. Thing is, she'll be broody and hubby would never know why ?.
I saw the ending coming from a mile away because I’ve read several different versions on this exact same theme! Nice writing!
Oh fabulously built, the love and loss brilliantly written and then, as Jen says, the final line just hits you. Just superb writing.
Oh that final line just hits you.