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The Perfect Way to Say Goodbye

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Lay me down and hold me close

Even though this tenderness hurts the most

It's too hard to look into your eyes

Remembering the hopes, the dreams and the lies

I was your dream girl and you my perfect man

We were going to tackle the world hand in hand

How did it all go so wrong?

When did we make each other weak instead of strong?

Now it's over for better or worse

Our happy bubble has long since burst

I want to hold onto the good times forever

And not the bad that would make us hate each other

So lay me down and hold me close

It's this tenderness that I always loved most

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Written by freakycactus
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Comments

Such sweet sorrow from the heart and soul
Clearly from the heart. Very moving and, as always, beautifully written.
Well done! It's so beautiful with honest emotions. We all need a closure to heal the wounds, to move on.
This was truly breathtaking... A new favourite xx
For some reason (possibly the title), I expected a thick slice of Lush cheese here... but not at all. Your intelligence, honesty, heartbreak, acceptance, strength, humanity and humility are truly moving. Thank you for sharing.
Loved your poem...very moving
Steeped in poignancy yet also showing great strength.

Very well done xx
And that my friend, is closure. x
This brought tears to my eyes. I have been there, and to know that its over even as you take one last moment to enjoy the passion you once shared, so bittersweet a moment
So moving...And So True!
Wonderful