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The Gift

"Submission is a gift, and I give it to you"

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Competition Entry: Valentine Poetry

Author's Notes

"This was a poem I wrote for my partner a few years ago when we got into your relationship. Up until this point, I hadn't shown anyone but him, so I'm excited. Hope you guys enjoy it! Mrs.Midnight"

He told me to close my eyes

And I did

A silk blindfold lapse over my eyes

 

He told me to hold my hands out

And I did

Metal cuffs clasped around my wrist

 

He told me to sit

And I did 

Leather fabric traced up my neck, a different sensation

 

He asked me if I trusted him

And I did 

Lead to the bed, with no hesitation

 

Fifty shades of grey

That is a tale of heartache and abuse

But people tend to take that as the truth

 

Submission is power

Way more than you know

Without trust and faith, then its a no go

 

Submission is strength

It's more than love or  lust

It's the strength of trust

 

Submission is content

Knowing yourself

Staying stable, without anyone else

 

Submission is understanding

Knowing firmly that person will never do you wrong

And that’s why you choose to go along

 

Submission is awareness

The power to take back control

But don’t cuz you know this is your place deep in your soul

 

Blind devotion is dangerous

Yes that's true

That’s why you discuss what you’ll do

 

He told me to lay back

And I did 

No regrets

 

He told me to prepare myself

And I did 

There was no real threat

 

He told me to relax

And I did

Leaned in for a kiss

 

He asked if I loved him

And I did 

To him, my submission was a gift

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Written by MrMrsMidnight
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