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Broken

"Sometimes you need to stop loving..."

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Dear heart, I beg you, please stop beating,
How can I love him, after cheating? 
Please forget his tender kiss,
Where once was love, please abyss?

Dear heart, forget him – he caused this aching,
So fragile now - the nights of waking.
He was not true, he chose to share,
All my love – he did not care.

Dear heart, I know you’ll never heal,
No other man allowed to steal.
Never will you love again,
Broken, dying, passion, pain.

Dear heart, I beg you, please stop beating,
This thing called love, it is but fleeting.
Shattered, torn, smashed and cracked, 
My heart now broken – that’s a fact.

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Written by AbigailThornton
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Comments

You have a wonderful way with words !!! I too have experienced heartbreak , one thinks one will never love again , sometimes it takes a while .
I felt your pain. I think it was a great poem its just not into poetry
We've all felt that pain at some point and you've captured it brilliantly
Gorgeous writing!
Heartfelt...painful, but well written! 5+
Wipes tears Oh, I really can relate. I just want to sit and cry from past memories over this piece. It makes me sad. Hugs you tight
Painful and beautiful, so sad
A most impressive work that comes few and far. My heart literocally stopped in awe to your great talent. I'd bow.
How many of us can feel your words deeply? So beautifully expressed and so sad. Thank you for writing it.
This is a very heartfelt and poignant poem. It is very emotional and beautiful. Lovely. 5
Anyone who has ever had their heart broken in this manner can surely relate to this poem. One doesn't write with this clarity w/o having experienced it first hand. I wish you well in love and life...thank you for sharing this with us. "5"+++

Rick
So emotive, really tugs at your heart. A great poem, thank you.
Very heavy, well written full of emotions,,,Hope your hurt is not too great, not all us guys are shallow and uncareing, in time one will come along that is a good guy.
Excellent. This is a really deep and sensitive poem, you wrote it beautifully.