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"Seduction gets turned up a notch"

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Bouncing in your chair, you're anxious. I can tell

that’s a song you know so well,

and the floor is filling up. Spanning, you swell

with excitement, but you get no offers.

 

The song fades to music, way too slow,

and with a pout you slump down. So

so late dance offers come. You let them go.

They don’t see you like I do.

 

I see the heat of your heart’s desire

for air. Your need to burn like a fire

enraged, an inferno. You’d never tire

of burning hotter, hotter, even hotter.

 

Patiently, I wait for a change of band,

and right on cue I make my stand.

Taking your hand, I silently command

your soul. Refute is pointless as you follow.

 

Knowing your want, I’ve set you free

for a soaring joy fulfilled with me.

I feel the fire that burns in thee,

and bring you closer, closer, even closer.

 

I draw you in to feel your heat.

Bodies bumping to the beat,

and in that heat our eyes should meet

unspoken... desire rising.

 

I hold you tight as the music slows.

No denying that my attention grows,

and you roll your hips oh so slow.

I know you’re wetter, wetter, even wetter.

 

I raise my hand to hold your face.

The rest of the world disappears without trace

as we become lost in time and space.

I close in, and you hold your breath.

 

I begin to kiss a soul’s embrace

with a lip lock you can’t replace.

You quickly invite me to your place,

and tonight gets better, better, even better.

 

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Written by Lokis_Sidekick
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Comments

Unknown User
4/5 Gold Stars. Cute.
Perfectly erotic and very well written. Really enjoyed reading
Thank you for the kind words my friend.
very hot, enjoyable read.............deana
Thanks so much for taking the time to read and enjoy. Your kind words mean a lot.
I'm impressed! Good to hear your voice too.
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for taking time to listen.
That was excellent! Also I enjoyed the audio :)
Thank you for stopping by, and your kind words. They bring a smile. :)
Lovely poem and even better with audio. Thank you so much for sharing a lovely read. Have a wonderful day:)
As always thank you for the kind words.
Nice Audio. A very intense and erotic piece. I gave you a five....xo
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Even better (ke) is part two ..just saying. Loved it, thank you for sharing.
Wouldn't you like to find out? Glad you liked it.
Very good poem. Great job.
Thank you for your kind words, and email.
Beautiful poem and your audio is fabulous! AND you get a new badge, not that I care about badges you understand? :-' 5+
Nice to have you rooting for me. As always, thanks.
Unknown User
Simply beautifully sweet!! ❤️
Your opinion means a lot. Thanks for your kind words. :)
This is “Better” than anything you have written before Loki, very well written indeed .. thanks for sharing and I look forward to reading more of your work ?
I appreciate your fast kind words. I didn't even know it was posted until you so beautifully told me.