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The Hall Pass part 1

"I give my fiancé a hall pass not expecting her to use it, but my sister had other plans"

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My hand was trembling as I reached for my phone. I could see it was a picture message from Taylah, my fiancé. It was the first time I had received one from Taylah, and I was worried about what it would be. It was her last week of freedom as a single woman; next Saturday, we would be married. My wedding gift to her was a hall pass to cut loose and go wild on her hen night out with her girls before she became my wife.

Under normal circumstances, I wouldn't worry about receiving a picture text message from her as Taylah is very conservative and quiet. To the point, my crazy and slutty little sister Carla calls her a stuck-up prude right to her face. I know it sounds harsh to say Carla is a slut, but her antics are well known to me as she purposely goes out of her way to fuck most of my friends, apparently having a gangbang with several of them in our flat one weekend when me a Taylah were away.

She constantly flirts outrageously with all my friends and me in front of Taylah to wind us both up and is always inappropriately dressed when she stays over with us. So, I know exactly what she is capable of. She is Taylah's closest friend, but I just wished Taylah hadn't told Carla about the hall pass thing. It just seemed to be a red rag to a bull.

Thankfully, Taylah knew the hall pass was my way of saying I trust her wholeheartedly and love her unconditionally. I mean, come on, it's Taylah; it's not like she will act on it or anything, right? 

I would find out soon enough Carla's influence on Taylah was more substantial than I anticipated. I received a couple of photo messages earlier from Carla depicting an incredibly good-looking guy with his tongue down Taylah's throat. A couple more followed of this guy's hands all over my fiancé's ass as they danced. Clearly, the drinks were loosening Taylah's normal conservative personality up.

It had been nearly two hours since I had received those photos from Carla, accompanied by a simple line reading, "Be careful what you wish for, Nick!"

Now, a lot can happen in that time. It was now after 01:00 am, and here I was now receiving a picture message from Taylah. My heart hoped it was a photo of her and Carla in the back of an Uber on their way home, but I had a bad feeling it was going to be much more.

As I said, my hand was trembling as I picked up my phone from the settee. My finger hovered above the message for what seemed like ages before I tapped the screen. The screen lit up, and my heart sank. It was a picture of my beautiful fiancé naked on her side, stroking the biggest cock I had ever seen. It must have been ten inches long and so fucking thick it put me to shame.

The owner of the cock, Scott, which I learned from the message attached to the pic, had two fingers shoved up Taylah's arse hole. Her pussy was literally dripping wet, I had never seen her this wet, and I had never been able to even get close to her arse hole that was definitely off-limits. But there was some stranger double-finger fucking her arsehole. And the look on her face said she loved every second of it. Looking at the pic, it was like he was stretching it open to slide that enormous cock into it.

My stomach churned, and I felt sick. I honestly didn't think Taylah would use the hall pass, I knew this was Carla's influence, and I would let her know what I thought of her when they got home. The phone chimed again, and another pic was attached. I again dreaded opening it but tapped the screen, it was similar to the first photo, but now I could see Taylah's arsehole was all stretched open, and Scott's cock looked even bigger and harder, if that was even possible.

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This time the message read, "Hasn't Scott got a magnificent cock? Tay is completely addicted to his big dick, so much so she has offered her virgin arse to him. PS, Tay says don't wait up; we probably won't be home tonight."

Fuck, I thought angrily and threw the phone on the settee next to me. That little slut of a sister has turned my Taylah into a whore like her. I got up and stormed across the room, furious that Taylah would do this to me, and then the light bulb moment happened.

I did this to me. I gave Taylah the hall pass. My exact words to her when she was getting dressed to go were, "Hey, it's your last week of freedom; next week, we will be married. Why don't you cut loose tonight, go wild, do something crazy?"

Taylah had just looked at me at the time and screwed up her nose, and said, "Like what? I don't know what you think we are doing. We are just going on a pub crawl with my girlfriends. I'm not going out to get laid, Nick, just because I'm getting married. I certainly hope you didn't do anything stupid last weekend with your friends like cheat on me?"

"What? No, of course not. I just mean, let your hair down have some fun. I'm sure Carla has organised a male stripper or something. And I'm ok if he touches you up a bit, or you know you give him a quick blowie," I had said.

"Fucking hell, what's got into you? I'm not going to be giving anyone a blowie, for Christ's sake, we are just going out for drinks and a laugh, maybe have a bit of a dance, there won't be anything else going on," Taylah replied, looking at me in a strange way.

"Ok, well, I'm just letting you know I trust you and love you, and I support whatever you get up to tonight," I said, reassuring her I wasn't trying to force her to do something.

So there it is; this was all my fault. I was the one that said she could go wild, and from those pictures, Taylah has done exactly what I told her she could do. I grabbed the bottle of scotch out of the cupboard and poured a large glass, and threw it back, trying to drown out my sorrow. I had just poured another one when my phone chimed again.

I retrieved my phone from the settee and opened it. I dropped the glass of whiskey to the floor. Taylah was laid back on a bed, her legs spread open, her pussy was gapping, and all stretched out of shape. Her puffy, swollen pussy lips and arsehole were all covered in cum. Scott's cock was just in the picture; he had just fucked Taylah deeper and probably better than I ever could.

The phone chimed again, and I tapped the screen. This time no picture, just a message.

"Scott says, thanks. He appreciates you lending out Tay's arse, mouth, and cunt for the night. He hopes you don't mind, but he never uses condoms. You might be lucky he might not have knocked her up this time. But he suggests you get her on the pill before the next time he fucks her. Oh, and Nick, Tay said he is definitely going to be fucking her again, so if you don't want to be looking after his kids, you better go to family planning. But don't worry, big brother, I've got your back. I licked as much cum as I could out of Tay's stretched-out cunt. I mean, what sort of sister-in-law would I be if I didn't help to stop my new sister from getting pregnant?"

"What the actual fuck?" I screamed out.


To be continued.

 

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Comments

Looks like his hall pass back fired on him a bit. Now is he still going to marry her?

Great story and well written. I like the way it goes straight into the action. A 5 star from me! 
Goodness, what kind of a dumbass was he? Knowing his sister would be the instigator of much trouble and gives a hall-pass. Can't fix stupid!!!

Nice twist. Looking forward to chapter 2.
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I am not usually a person that reads Cuckold stories, but I gave it a go. I am happy with your story, and I like your characters. Hope to read more. Reading some of the comments and looking at the votes it is easy to see that you have hurt a lot of peoples feelings. The true mark of a good storyteller.
Shadowforce1, thank you for taking the time to read my story. Yes I agree so many hurt butts but I’m cool with that I would prefer people to score the story based on story line, presentation and how the story is told but that’s ok, and thank for your comment.
Well that went a long way from a blowie and her saying she wouldn't do anything. Tay and Carla have no respect for him giving up her arse 1st time to a stranger and laughing about it. Given it was a one time pass before getting married, the suggestion of having Scott again is all the info he needs to call off the wedding or decide he's going to live as a cuck... next on the list Plan B or not Plan B... so far nothing new, as Duck's said it's what happens next will be interesting.
Great story, good writing and on to part 2.
Nick is screwed. If he should of known better than give a hall pass. Time to move on and forget her.
Thanks for the story. It’s been a while since there was a well written cuckold story. There is nothing new in the story, but there doesn’t need to be. What makes the story a good cuckold story is learning how the protagonist feels and responds. Those feelings are what makes cuckolding so addictive. A great cuckold story is not “he put that here” and “she did this.” It’s how they feel and respond to each other in the circumstance. It’s also a love story not an abuse story. You have the elements of a good story. I’ll be waiting for chapter two.
I believe youre correct on the reactions for sure but I really enjoy learning how they find out and the specifics of the events as well. But I had to agree completely as the feelings that rush through the cuckolds entier body and mind is the perfect Crescendo
DucksCuck, thank you for reading the story and commenting, I think everyone will be pleased with the rest of the story.
Wow this is an interesting turn of events a story written about cuckolding posted in the cuckold category receiving so much attention, look at the voting it may have touched a nerve or two which as Cranefly mentions if it evokes feelings then it’s has to be good right? I do find it quite amusing that so many Alpha males read cuckold stories. I have a very vivid imagination and wrote this in about an hour while bored at work, I hadn’t even given a thought to part 2 yet as I have multiple stories on the go. But now I wonder which way will it go hmmmmm. As always though I do appreciate the feed back, and thanks for taking the time to read my stories.
Well its good he finds out she a slut now rather than later
Its always bettet to find that slurry side of your significant other. If you're fortunate like I was and find out the first night that you're with your significant other that they can be a complete slut then you can use that to your advantage as we have.
So if Nick goes through with wedding will have to bring Scott on the honeymoon as he will be the only one who can fuck the bride well enough . Nick needs to forward all pics and texts to family and friends with a note saying if there is a wedding it will be with someone other than him as the groom. Also, if Taylah is pregnant Scott is father, maybe she should marry him! A final text to Carla and Taylah telling them to stay away from him as they are both dead to him, also letting them know that all texts and pics have been forwarded to all family and friends so their phones should start getting real busy real soon.
Nick needs to respond to the last text that Scott can fuck her all she wants because the wedding is definitely over. And to his sister he needs to disown her and tell them both to never show their face around him ever again. Give Nick some balls and end the relationship from the 2 whores!!
People you need to cool your criticism of this story! It's most likely a fantasy and even if it isn't it doesn't mean he's going to become a cuck. I've had a permanent hall pass since our wedding and have been married for over thirty years. My husband isn't a cuck and enjoys watching me fuck other men and women! This is an intensely hot story and can't wait to see where it goes from here!!
Getting mad at the characters isn’t criticizing the writing. Consider it evidence that the author has successfully gotten under my skin, which is the mark of a compelling story.
In the real world this would be the end of the relationship. She clearly exceeded the hall pass and seems intent on continuing the good times with Scott. Of course this is someone’s fantasy and these stories usually end up with the guy being a cuck. It was a good read and I’ll be looking for part 2 to see what kind of man Nick is.
Good thing this happen before the wedding, Nick can call off the wedding and save himself from being cuckold by a woman who obviously doesn't care about hurting him.
Taylah has definitely pushed the hall pass beyond limits. I hope Nick has a very forgiving nature but this seems far beyond what is forgivable.
Fast paced and out of control story for sure. Maybe the wedding is off. Nick will be in jail after what he does to his sister and GF. Watching to see how the story really continues.
Nick is a dumbass and a jerk because a gift that you expect the person to not use isn’t a gift, it’s a test. Taylah’s an idiot because whether it was a test or not, she failed spectacularly, and apparently intends to go on failing flagrantly for the rest of the week. She’s about to find out that there is a difference between what you think you have a right to, and what will get you dumped by an infuriated partner if you actually take it. (Or maybe we won’t see that, if Nick has been written as spineless.) There is no such thing as an unlimited hall pass. There is always, ALWAYS a line somewhere which if crossed spells doom. If she had taken permission to totally cut loose as an opportunity to get blackout drunk and drive her car through a sidewalk of pedestrians, would he have to just accept that?
Very nice introduction to the life Scott will be living.it is not to late for him to backout.
A bright red line has been crossed. Taylah has promised to continue an affair after the wedding, with Carla’s assistance. That would be the end of any relationship between either of them and me (as Nick).
The wedding is still a week away, so it could be she only intends to take the rest of the week. Still, the hall pass seems to be worded as only applying to the night of the hen party. Maybe there will be some tension about whether never letting party night finish up counts as extending it through the rest of the week. In any case, I don’t think his invitation ever included “torment me, humiliate me, and threaten me with false paternity”, so if this is going to hinge on technicalities, she is still in gross breach, and by rights she should come home to a rude and permanent surprise.