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mattguize
Over 90 days ago
Bisexual Male, 40
United Kingdom

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Some really interesting points, especially in regards to the use of tags. There is something about not wanting to overburden the text with too much descriptive narrative, a category I suspect these adverbial tags fall into. (On a side note, must use the word "adverbial" more in conversation.) On the other hand, too little, and there's the risk that you may not be able to convey into words how it's sounding in your head.

Hmmm. Much to ponder.

"And just what is a Fiddle Faddle?" he wondered.
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Thank you! Some good advice here. Will try to put it to good use!
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Hi,

I've been pondering the art of conversation; or, to be more specific, how to construct conversation within literature without it sounding cheesy. it's something I'm not, truthfully, really that good at, to the point where I've found myself actively avoided scripting dialogue for fear of failing to do the story and the characters justice.

So yeah, I just wondered if any one has any hints / suggestions / methods that they've found useful in writing conversations?

Matt
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I know it's probably a very common fantasy, but my number one bucket list is to have a MFM threesum, where the lady is the centre of attention, until all three are fully and utterly sated.
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It is a seriously erotic thing to do, esp. with the first load of the session!
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Why should it make any difference? Sexuality need not be limited.
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agree with whats already been said. It's good to be honest, both with yourself and with others. Hope this is the start of a good adventure! And trust me, it is good to explore biggrin
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"Five Variants of Dives and Lazarus" (adagio). Not my usual, but helps when working from home!