Depends: Sam series can be very hot; new Tight Girl is about 90% heat. The Love Show is ~20% and no actual sex for first 7 chapters and I'm editing that for StoSpc to be allowable there

Quote by Rosiex369

When I write, I often find myself writing about a character's backstory that is not relevant to the story, but when I remove it, it looks just so empty. And I do like to go into detail. Would you write more irrelevant things so that the reader has a good image in their head while reading, or would you sacrifice it for the sake of story progression?

With my Sam series, I've fed it in where appropriate to enlighten. Think that's the best way

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I'm looking for an editor/proofer/ general feedback and comments on a piece. It is 7580 words/ 13 pages in Microsoft word. This is only my second published story so any help would be appreciated. I have run it through two different grammar/ proofing programs. Please message me if interested and I can give more details.

Thank you in advance,

Do a word Spell and grammar, then Grammarly - though that is grumpy if you aren't using US-EN

anissa Kate is horny and sensual too

I wrote the Sam series, initially as a screw-story after seeing a newspaper story. While there is a lot of that in it, its developed a long way and I've made the characters a lot more rounded (as well as Sam's bust!)

Nothing wrong with old chat. New chat inferior in general UX

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Yes, sending fully naked pics to my hubby while he had business travels.

Also send naked pics to net friends before too, but without showing my face

as long as not identifiable, it can be fun?

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2 hours ago laying on my bed reading a lush story.

Do tell which one: think that happens to a lot of us :-)

Talking to someone about some sex activity that happened on another site - she hadn't explored that deep: we were both getting horny and MTB'g at the same time with the talk about goings on

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Cory chase for sure.
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CC is a bit samey: all her scenes are similar vs e.g. Angela White

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I am like most here. I have written a couple of stories. That were rejected. Appreciate any help I can get

put it through Word checker. They are funny about punctuation in quotes, so might be best to rework to avoid direct quotes

Hi. one of my stories keeps getting knocked back. have done full Word check. Can anyone help me please

I like Angela White: she went into Porn knowing that she wanted to be a star and produces her own stuff. She doesn't do much MILF as she's not built that way,

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Ava Addams. Love her bosom and natural hips.

She's got a good set of moves too

No. My GF came round to the house and started kissing me passionately from the off which was unsual. We went into my room and started doing our usual foreplay. Then she said "do I want to try?". I said "yes - no condom". She said I could do a 6 gentle thrusts in a few places, so I did that. Next night, I'd got some ..

Cory Chase Cory Chase Porn Videos & XXX Movies is good:

I met a lady on FS. we chatted online for about 2 weeks - including videos so we knew we were legit. We'd talked about what we were looking for. We arranged to meet at a cafe to start with to be safe. Then we drove to my house and we got in and started exploring.

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My last time having sex [HONESTLY] was a month ago. With some guy I don't even remember!
BUT ITS OK!

Not worth a second hit then?