Oh, God, it's like Sophie's choice.
You gotta figure a chick who's going to let you fuck her in the ass is also going to suck your cock...
But gun to my head, a good blowjob.
Anal's hot as fuck in the heat of the moment, but I think it's more the idea than anything. It's much more comfortable in the pink than the stink. Besides, a good blowy can be really nasty.
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Wilful
Over 90 days ago
Straight Cis Male, 49
0 miles · Sydney
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Moby Dick and Uncle Tom's Cabin. Seems I'm destined to remain ignorant of whatever essential life lessons they offer.
And To Kill A Mockingbird the second time around, the first being at gunpoint when I was at school. Although to be fair, my Audible crapped out and I couldn't be bothered retrying the download.
And To Kill A Mockingbird the second time around, the first being at gunpoint when I was at school. Although to be fair, my Audible crapped out and I couldn't be bothered retrying the download.
Devil's Advocate
Introduce the title of your story: Long Time Coming
Genre/Category: Straight Sex
Provide the link: https://www.lushstories.com/stories/straight-sex/long-time-coming.aspx
1. What first inspired you to write this particular story?
I’ve been looking for other writers to collaborate with for some time now, and I knew from my friendship with Kiera that our writing styles would complement each other really well. Her plot development is always thoughtful, with plenty of realism and dashes of humour, and while sometimes a bit rough around the edges, she writes very quickly. To say nothing of the scorching heat she brings to her sex scenes.
Me, I’m more painstaking in my approach, trying to wring out every possible sensation while at the same time ruthlessly cutting all the unnecessary guff. So much so, Verbal has labelled me the Carefully Constructed Sentences Guy. So, with Kiera blazing it down and me coming over the top to polish it up, it was a match made in heaven.
The story itself? That was all Kiera. You’ll have to ask her.
2. How did you come up with these characters?
Kiera again did the heavy lifting on the character development, particularly with her namesake. I imagine – let’s be honest, I hope – the female lead is loosely based on her. I know I certainly steered my edits that way when shaping some of the interactions. She’s a bit of a hot mess and an absolute firecracker in the sack, but underneath all that is a sweet and tender heart.
As for the male lead, I dialled my flattering perception of myself up to eleven and let fly. A brash fish out of water, my Australian hooligan in London ran riot, taking whatever he wanted, his charm letting him get away with murder. But the layers of his character peel back to reveal something much more sincere.
3. How does it differ from some of your other stories?
Apart from the obvious, a first person female in the present tense written with Kiera? We injected a lot of humour into this one, more so than I’ve ever had before.
Also, I really didn’t have any significant input into where this one went. Sure, my fingerprints are all over it – hang on, let me sit with that thought for a minute… - but this is Kiera’s story. I was well and truly up the back handing out the peanuts, rather than sitting in the co-pilot’s seat. It was actually kind of fun to let go and just enjoy the ride.
4. What was the most challenging thing about writing this piece?
Getting enough sleep. I pulled a few all-nighters on this one. Let me tell you, when Kiera sends through a draft of a raw sex scene between two characters you think are, at least in some small way, based on you, you ain’t sleepin’!
5. Anything else you want to tell us about it?
I’m absolutely delighted that this piece earned a Recommended Read for us. It was Kiera’s first, and if I do say so myself, I think it was very well deserved. You should definitely check it out.
Genre/Category: Straight Sex
Provide the link: https://www.lushstories.com/stories/straight-sex/long-time-coming.aspx
1. What first inspired you to write this particular story?
I’ve been looking for other writers to collaborate with for some time now, and I knew from my friendship with Kiera that our writing styles would complement each other really well. Her plot development is always thoughtful, with plenty of realism and dashes of humour, and while sometimes a bit rough around the edges, she writes very quickly. To say nothing of the scorching heat she brings to her sex scenes.
Me, I’m more painstaking in my approach, trying to wring out every possible sensation while at the same time ruthlessly cutting all the unnecessary guff. So much so, Verbal has labelled me the Carefully Constructed Sentences Guy. So, with Kiera blazing it down and me coming over the top to polish it up, it was a match made in heaven.
The story itself? That was all Kiera. You’ll have to ask her.
2. How did you come up with these characters?
Kiera again did the heavy lifting on the character development, particularly with her namesake. I imagine – let’s be honest, I hope – the female lead is loosely based on her. I know I certainly steered my edits that way when shaping some of the interactions. She’s a bit of a hot mess and an absolute firecracker in the sack, but underneath all that is a sweet and tender heart.
As for the male lead, I dialled my flattering perception of myself up to eleven and let fly. A brash fish out of water, my Australian hooligan in London ran riot, taking whatever he wanted, his charm letting him get away with murder. But the layers of his character peel back to reveal something much more sincere.
3. How does it differ from some of your other stories?
Apart from the obvious, a first person female in the present tense written with Kiera? We injected a lot of humour into this one, more so than I’ve ever had before.
Also, I really didn’t have any significant input into where this one went. Sure, my fingerprints are all over it – hang on, let me sit with that thought for a minute… - but this is Kiera’s story. I was well and truly up the back handing out the peanuts, rather than sitting in the co-pilot’s seat. It was actually kind of fun to let go and just enjoy the ride.
4. What was the most challenging thing about writing this piece?
Getting enough sleep. I pulled a few all-nighters on this one. Let me tell you, when Kiera sends through a draft of a raw sex scene between two characters you think are, at least in some small way, based on you, you ain’t sleepin’!
5. Anything else you want to tell us about it?
I’m absolutely delighted that this piece earned a Recommended Read for us. It was Kiera’s first, and if I do say so myself, I think it was very well deserved. You should definitely check it out.
Devil's Advocate
All good advice, although I have to respectfully disagree with the third rule.
Only using "said" is such a missed opportunity to paint a vivid picture for the reader. If you're striving for show instead of tell, as we all should, then how did they say it? That gasp, whisper, mumble, spit, snap, shout or any other enlightening verb can really bring the dialogue to life. Done well, you know exactly what the character is feeling without the need for further description.
Otherwise, it's just talking heads. I have to agree with Sylvana, "said" is boring.
Of course, having said that, I recently did an online masterclass with James Patterson who read out a few pages of dialogue he thought was really good... and nothing but "said". Say what you like about him, he's the biggest selling author in the world, so what the hell do I know?
Only using "said" is such a missed opportunity to paint a vivid picture for the reader. If you're striving for show instead of tell, as we all should, then how did they say it? That gasp, whisper, mumble, spit, snap, shout or any other enlightening verb can really bring the dialogue to life. Done well, you know exactly what the character is feeling without the need for further description.
Otherwise, it's just talking heads. I have to agree with Sylvana, "said" is boring.
Of course, having said that, I recently did an online masterclass with James Patterson who read out a few pages of dialogue he thought was really good... and nothing but "said". Say what you like about him, he's the biggest selling author in the world, so what the hell do I know?
Devil's Advocate
I think the key phrase here is "build up". Fast or slow, the story needs to be moving forward. And more importantly, the tension needs to be rising.
I detest the brakes being slammed on for a police report of the suspects with bra and cock sizes tacked on by typically male writers, or the endless boutique catalog descriptions of clothing from mostly female authors. I could also do without the in-depth write ups of the food being eaten on the way to poundtown from both genders, like they're keeping an allergy diary for their doctor. The only place I want to see that is in the Gourmet forum, specifically what Buz had for lunch and dinner on any given day. That guy eats like a motherfuckin' king!
The build up is what makes the story. At the end of the day, it's all Tab A into Slot B, or variations thereof. Getting to that point is where the excitement is born. For that reason, I don't usually like the stories that are straight into it or open with a taste before cutting back to the plot like they're a big-budget action movie. There are the exceptions of course, like Sprite who can actually grip you with the sex alone - I'm fresh off one of her Seattle Mix Tape pieces.
I detest the brakes being slammed on for a police report of the suspects with bra and cock sizes tacked on by typically male writers, or the endless boutique catalog descriptions of clothing from mostly female authors. I could also do without the in-depth write ups of the food being eaten on the way to poundtown from both genders, like they're keeping an allergy diary for their doctor. The only place I want to see that is in the Gourmet forum, specifically what Buz had for lunch and dinner on any given day. That guy eats like a motherfuckin' king!
The build up is what makes the story. At the end of the day, it's all Tab A into Slot B, or variations thereof. Getting to that point is where the excitement is born. For that reason, I don't usually like the stories that are straight into it or open with a taste before cutting back to the plot like they're a big-budget action movie. There are the exceptions of course, like Sprite who can actually grip you with the sex alone - I'm fresh off one of her Seattle Mix Tape pieces.
Devil's Advocate
Yep. I arranged an escort to come to my apartment about eleven years ago, choosing her based on the receptionist's description. When she walked in with her driver/security, she was smoking hot, even better than I imagined. I couldn't pay up and get the driver out of there fast enough.
But when she opened her mouth, my skin crawled.
Not to let the opportunity pass me by, I threw myself into it full tilt. I figured if I kept her busy enough, she wouldn't say much. It was one of the few times I fully lost myself. After finger-banging her while we made out, I bent her in half and fucked the absolute shit out of her. It was really hot.
Afterwards, as we lay there coming down, she started to get a little chatty. I actually shushed her. I just had to. Not my finest hour...
But when she opened her mouth, my skin crawled.
Not to let the opportunity pass me by, I threw myself into it full tilt. I figured if I kept her busy enough, she wouldn't say much. It was one of the few times I fully lost myself. After finger-banging her while we made out, I bent her in half and fucked the absolute shit out of her. It was really hot.
Afterwards, as we lay there coming down, she started to get a little chatty. I actually shushed her. I just had to. Not my finest hour...
Devil's Advocate
Naked's good, especially in bed, but there's something about her covering up a little that gets my motor running. Funnily enough though, I don't really go in for the lingerie and all the gear. What I find the sexiest is a tight t-shirt or singlet and a simple pair of panties, especially with a bit of exposed skin around her midriff.
The other thing that does it for me is a pair of long pyjama pants with nothing underneath, either with a matching top or tee, that hang low around her hips. I think it's the cute everygirl thing that does it for me. Pulling that waistband down over her curves is... oh my!
The other thing that does it for me is a pair of long pyjama pants with nothing underneath, either with a matching top or tee, that hang low around her hips. I think it's the cute everygirl thing that does it for me. Pulling that waistband down over her curves is... oh my!
Devil's Advocate
A friend of mine had it done a few years back and she's still overweight. In fact I can't really tell the difference in her appearance.
I can't comment on what or how much she's eating at home, but when we have lunch together, she'll eat no more than a quarter of her meal before she says she's full and can't eat anymore. Watching her tentatively pick her way through it like she's walking through a minefield, it doesn't look like fun.
As others have said, I think the key to success is focussing on the cause rather than a medical quick fix. Best of luck either way.
I can't comment on what or how much she's eating at home, but when we have lunch together, she'll eat no more than a quarter of her meal before she says she's full and can't eat anymore. Watching her tentatively pick her way through it like she's walking through a minefield, it doesn't look like fun.
As others have said, I think the key to success is focussing on the cause rather than a medical quick fix. Best of luck either way.
Devil's Advocate
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On royal decree, I've been granted permission to post the whole story here on Lush at https://www.lushstories.com/stories/oral-sex/adrenalin.aspx
I'd very much love it if you'd give it a read and let me know what you thought.
And of course, I still highly recommend you picking up a copy of Lush Summer on Amazon if you haven't already. Some amazingly hot stories for sure. And even though some of them now might be posted on site, there's some others that you won't find anywere else. Well worth it.
I'd very much love it if you'd give it a read and let me know what you thought.
And of course, I still highly recommend you picking up a copy of Lush Summer on Amazon if you haven't already. Some amazingly hot stories for sure. And even though some of them now might be posted on site, there's some others that you won't find anywere else. Well worth it.
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