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Ghost
4 weeks ago
Straight Male, 59
United States

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Quote by nicola
I hadn't noticed that before.

In IE, pressing Enter give you what seems like a double line space, holding shift + enter gives you one space. In Firefox, pressing enter just gives you the one line space, as does holidng shift + enter.

I'll see if something can be done to make it more cross browser compatible.


Any progress on this, as I hate having to track down a PC to fix the paragraph spacing, the double line space is really the best looking. Hitting two single lines in Firefox looks too big.
Wow. That excerpt it is so bad it is funny. If you tried to make up an example of what is not worth hosting you would be hard pressed to top that. Again, Wow.

Seems like a good idea.
This is funny all the techno-babble and the police siren in the background adds that perfect ambiance .
OK, after reading another very good story with no quotation marks and 4" spacing between paragraphs I wanted to propose that lush consider adding a volunteer editor system. The idea is this:

For each logged in member you can click edit on a story. This makes a copy that you can edit in your list of edited documents. If you finish, you "publish" it back to the author for approval. If the author approves it is goes live (maybe with a list of editors at the bottom or something to give credit).

There might need to be a way to allow approval if the author never logs on again (like maybe a button saying "Ghost edited this story...read the edited version here") after 30 or so days.

Also a rating system for editors (like the forum "ratings") could be used to rank editors (helping authors who are not sure if the edits are an improvement or not make a decision based upon editor rank)

I know this isn't trivial to implement (I'm a programmer), but, boy it would sure help the quality of the stories a whole lot.
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Wow, we have a winner -- instant erection. Nice post!
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Whats fair is fair guys. I LOVE to have my nippers licked, sucked, pinched, and nibbled on. I told my man that when I play with his nipples I am showing him the things I would do if a woman was with us. Drives him crazy! I love it too! You must use your mind as well as your body in bed.AlJDVNYkvxA14UiN


Ask him if you telling him that did more for his arousal than what you actually did. It would with me, just reading about it drives me crazy.

Hot post, you tented my speedo
Hey I wrote a whole story on this topic, check out Gina gives the perfect blowjob.

A few points: (1) Make the guy cum, or let him stop you. I knew one girl that licked twice and then moved on. It might take a bit. (2) Guys are visual, let him see your body. If you are on a bed get on all fours so he can watch your dangling breasts, don't just lay there. Kneeling, like in my story, also is more visual. (3) Use your hand or it might take a long long time. Dirty talk might speed him to orgasm, if he likes that.
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Observation: no male responses. Do they not have limits?


NO..! I think they’re just happy to be getting laid..


Yes indeed...but I would do the pink power ranger (that cracked me up!!!)
I use first person primarily, but die write one multiple viewpoint story (divided in the middle), Alone after dinner. This was difficult for me because it was the first time I tried to present the female point of view. I like how this one came out but I think multiple viewpoint gets harder the more viewpoint transitions you do. It can quickly confuse the reader. Who is this? What happened to the last viewpoint?

Another important similar issue is tense, past tense is most common (and highly recommended) but I have written one present tense story. I found this very hard to do, but was trying to get a different feel from the story, make it a bit uncomfortable, erotically sad so to speak. That one was Watching at the strip bar. This story was a bit of a flop. I do, however, like some of the imagry.
The more the content grows it is becoming harder to find good stories.

Might it be possible to create lists of stories attached to a user that allow folks to "recommend" a set of stories. I would think each list would be:

o have a name and a description
o public or private
o never include stories by that author
o have a rating similar to a story (so that the best lists can peculate to the top).

Just an idea. I've asked many folks for suggestions and they lose track of stories they like. There is no way to pull up the list of stories that you have rated and how you rated it either to track down ones you liked, that might be an idea as well.

Thanks!
The details of the soon to be ravished girl's body in the first paragraph:

It was a nice day and Jill and I were talking. She was 5'1" tall with 36C breasts and 1" diameter nipples that poked out prominently from her bra. She had a 24" waist and ass cheeks that made my throbbing manhood, well, throb, well, a lot...


You get the idea.

Also, any reference to a "fine piece of ass."
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Hope there are no evil mothers who do not like artistic pictures like that.


I'm not sure "artistic" is quite the right word for that picture :-)
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ok...you might have some issues if you want to come on your own face....that is just nasty!!!!


Hey to each it’s own --- but do any of you guys really enjoy cuming on your face?


We males are a sick bunch :-) I don't enjoy this, but I'm sure some do. Sometimes when a guy masturbates laying on his back, the cum shoots all the way to his face by sheer force of the ejaculation. Most likely he has been stimulated for a very long time to shoot this far. Only the first or second spurt has any chance of doing this, see wikipedia the clip below:


http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Ejaculation_educational_ani_short.gif

Some guys wrap something around the penis to avoid a mess (i.e., the sock), I've done this but it feels better to me to cum freely, so to speak. So I have to clean up a bit.

Masturbating into panties or pictures or <fill in the blank> as noted above also can add to the pleasure for some, but it makes a bit of a mess. What stimulates a guy is a bit individual, but in all cases the cum flies!
Nope, I have never have been able to tell. I guess my penis is not sensitive in that regard.

Now, I typically try to ensure I bring her to orgasm with my tongue or my finders before I "go for it" inside her. But after I cum I'll offer to to "lend her a hand" if she wants to climax again.
My example is similar to the girls above in the sense of being a bit premature.

I once went to a whore house in the Netherlands. I was so excited, and so nervous, having never done this before, that the sight of the girls nearly made me come in my pants. But I survived the lobby with out unloading, so to speak, and made it to a room. When the girl laid me down on the bed and stroked my pubic hair with her fingernails I exploded all over myself. I was so embarrassed that I left right away. I never went back to a whore house again, ever! It was an awful experience, but now I guess it was kinda funny.
Quote by nicola
I find it very repetitive with "I wonder how you feel" to start each verse. Maybe mix it up a little.

"Hardness " of teeth? That's not very sexy - hardness in relation to nipples is better.

You're using the same words repeatedly - hardness / body. It needs variety imho.

A nice idea Ghost


Thanks for the helpful and concrete advice, I'll try some edits soon.
Ok. looking into the spacing problem a bit more it seems to be a browser issue. Using 'Enter' for double spacing and 'Shift-Enter' for single spacing only works in Internet Explorer not Firefox.
Purely research, but can you feel him ejaculate? Not just tell from his actions that he did? Thanks in advance!!
Shoes do nothing for me. Each guy probably has his thing, remember that it's you, not the "thing" that he likes, but we do like the "thing" on your body a lot. It gives pleasure. As you can probably tell from my stories I'm into skirts, bras, and panties. Panties especially do it for me. I speculate that "leg" guys like the high heels because it lengthens your legs, but they will have to answer for themselves.
Dry or with lubricant, The lubricant has to be gel, my current is KY Warming Gel...so nice and warm. Actually the warming stuff makes me last a bit longer which is nice.
I've had trouble getting special characters into my story, can you post a HOWTO if it doesn't exist. In particular n- and m-dash. Paragraph spacing is also tricky. One CR seems to add no space between paragraphs and two CRs creates too much.

Any help is appreciated.
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Oh dear lord Zafia, that is hot. Instant hard-on for me. Many Thanks!
I'm not really "into" stories, but I'll read one if it is well written. I separate the fantasy from reality, those news stories make me ill. The news is real the story is fiction.