Hi, I need a read proofer / story approver to ask a few questions about something I'm writing in my new story.
I am not sure it could be accepted, and I want to know from a member of the staff.
Can you please contact me?
Thank you.
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Over 90 days ago
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I have to say, based on your original post, you seem reasonably competent with the English language. Certainly I have seen stories posted with worse grammar/spelling.
It's lovely to see someone so keen (or "eager") to make a good contribution to the site.
Thank you
I'm flattered :P
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Thank You, NaughtyAnn.
PM replyed, email sent.
And thank you moderator, who kindly answered and explained what was wrong In my story.
Sadly my english skill are not enough to understand how to correct it.
Looking forward for the kind help of NaughtyAnn. Thank You again ;)
PM replyed, email sent.
And thank you moderator, who kindly answered and explained what was wrong In my story.
Sadly my english skill are not enough to understand how to correct it.
Looking forward for the kind help of NaughtyAnn. Thank You again ;)
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Hi,
I had my first story rejected, with the reason:
"Story doesn't meet our quality standards. Please consider posting a request for proofreading and editing assistance in our Writer's Resources forum. Thank you. "
Since It is my first story ever and more than this it is in a - for me - foreing language, the rejection was something I considered possible and of course perfectly acceptable. The challenge is thrilling.
The problem is I can't understand what was wrong with it, since "quality standards" is quite a wide range of things.
Is it written with a poor grammar? Did I use wrong terms? Is it too fast, too slow, too soft, too hard? Is it tiring to read? Is the punctuation too heavy or too rare? Etc... Etc...
I don't know.
So, I'm here asking is there someone so gentle and sweet who would help me to understand, so I could correct the story and make it better? Or who could help a little in writing it better?
I would change everything needed to let the story at least acceptable
Thank You in advance :)
I had my first story rejected, with the reason:
"Story doesn't meet our quality standards. Please consider posting a request for proofreading and editing assistance in our Writer's Resources forum. Thank you. "
Since It is my first story ever and more than this it is in a - for me - foreing language, the rejection was something I considered possible and of course perfectly acceptable. The challenge is thrilling.
The problem is I can't understand what was wrong with it, since "quality standards" is quite a wide range of things.
Is it written with a poor grammar? Did I use wrong terms? Is it too fast, too slow, too soft, too hard? Is it tiring to read? Is the punctuation too heavy or too rare? Etc... Etc...
I don't know.
So, I'm here asking is there someone so gentle and sweet who would help me to understand, so I could correct the story and make it better? Or who could help a little in writing it better?
I would change everything needed to let the story at least acceptable
Thank You in advance :)