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Looking for help for my (rejected) first story...

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Hi,
I had my first story rejected, with the reason:

"Story doesn't meet our quality standards. Please consider posting a request for proofreading and editing assistance in our Writer's Resources forum. Thank you. "

Since It is my first story ever and more than this it is in a - for me - foreing language, the rejection was something I considered possible and of course perfectly acceptable. The challenge is thrilling.
The problem is I can't understand what was wrong with it, since "quality standards" is quite a wide range of things.
Is it written with a poor grammar? Did I use wrong terms? Is it too fast, too slow, too soft, too hard? Is it tiring to read? Is the punctuation too heavy or too rare? Etc... Etc...
I don't know.

So, I'm here asking is there someone so gentle and sweet who would help me to understand, so I could correct the story and make it better? Or who could help a little in writing it better?
I would change everything needed to let the story at least acceptable smile
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Thank You in advance :)
I don't mind reading and editing your story for you, I will send you a private message with my email address.
Thank You, NaughtyAnn.

PM replyed, email sent.
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And thank you moderator, who kindly answered and explained what was wrong In my story.
Sadly my english skill are not enough to understand how to correct it.
Looking forward for the kind help of NaughtyAnn. Thank You again ;)
I have to say, based on your original post, you seem reasonably competent with the English language. Certainly I have seen stories posted with worse grammar/spelling.

It's lovely to see someone so keen (or "eager") to make a good contribution to the site.
I have pm'd you just in case you still want help.

Best regards and good luck.

P4ML
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I have to say, based on your original post, you seem reasonably competent with the English language. Certainly I have seen stories posted with worse grammar/spelling.

It's lovely to see someone so keen (or "eager") to make a good contribution to the site.


Thank you smile
I'm flattered :P
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I have pm'd you just in case you still want help.

Best regards and good luck.

P4ML


Thank You smile
Replyed.