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Boondocker42
Over 90 days ago
Straight Male, 51
0 miles · Denver

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Some of my stories turn into over-long slogs. I know this. But some I manage to keep tight.

I just posted "A Good Man's Just Reward". It is under 12,000 words so I did have to post it in two parts but I think it's a fast read. Both parts are already up.

A loving and beloved husband and father is granted a hall pass to teach the hot, young babysitter the joys of sex. The story is actually told from the second-hand perspective of the wife who is not present for the real action. I think her commentary adds an interesting tone.

Be aware that part 1 ends at the cusp intimacy. I suppose you could just skip to part 2 but you'd really be missing out on the buildup :d/

I'm always looking for feedback of course.

I don't yet have link-posting rights. Could someone do me a big favor and comment with links to both parts of A Good Man's Just Reward?


Thank you.
After posting a simple standalone story with "Damaged but Renewed", I have posted a 3-part story featuring a character that I've done quite a bit with.

Stacy Lancaster and her husband are a healthy, young couple exploring swinging and each other. She has a powerful sex drive and he has the stuff to keep up.

"San Diego" is about a second honeymoon. As I said, these characters engage in swinging but this specific story takes place before that begins.

I am not yet able to post links.

Part 1 is seductive and kind of sweet.

Part 2 is about sun, sand, a little voyeurism and intense teasing.

Part 3 is pure sex. A loving couple indulging their large appetites.

Each ends on a good stopping point so don't feel that you have to plow through all three.


Thanks for checking it out.


Boondocker
I've had a tiny stub of a story idea that I've been kicking around a few years but it hasn't jelled for me at all. You know, something where the two sentence description sounds good but I can't get any traction with it.

So I thought I'd just put it out there to perhaps inspire others.

A relatively young woman seemingly makes a living as a BDSM call-girl. And the reader is given to believe she's high cost but lets the client "do anything at all" to her.

And we see a session where she's put through the wringer. Bondage and electricity and needles... whatever the author is comfortable writing about.

And at the end, when the client thinks they've gotten their money's worth and releases her, in a flash she spins them around and locks them in whatever device or bondage they'd had her in. (Or perhaps she picks a moment mid session when she has an opening).

And then she......

Robs them blind. Because they're all rich schmucks and would never be able to report her.

One additional twist I'd been trying to work in is that part of her personality is a complete lack of fear. Not bravery or "guts" but an actual pathological lack of fear response. She hates pain just as much as anyone but doesn't respond to the immanent threat of pain. And afterward, while she clearly remembers the pain and certainly doesn't want it to happen again, she still doesn't feel *fear*. At most, an intellectual acknowledgement that "I'm about to experience something I will not like experiencing. Regrettable. But I think it's worth it for my goal".

Anyway, I can't actually get it to work in my head, much less on the page. So I welcome anyone who likes to kick the tires and try it out if they are inspired by the idea.
I'm new to the site but not a new author.

Damaged but Renewed features a very fit young woman who begins the story lonely, depressed and innocent.

Not to worry. Unexpected events involving a massage table and a handy stud show her that there's a life after gymnastics. At the moment this is the only story about April but she's been on my mind, there may be more in her future.

I can't post links yet but check out my profile.

I've got a medium size stock of stories I'll be posting. Hope people enjoy them.


Boondocker