Some of my stories turn into over-long slogs. I know this. But some I manage to keep tight.
I just posted "A Good Man's Just Reward". It is under 12,000 words so I did have to post it in two parts but I think it's a fast read. Both parts are already up.
A loving and beloved husband and father is granted a hall pass to teach the hot, young babysitter the joys of sex. The story is actually told from the second-hand perspective of the wife who is not present for the real action. I think her commentary adds an interesting tone.
Be aware that part 1 ends at the cusp intimacy. I suppose you could just skip to part 2 but you'd really be missing out on the buildup :d/
I'm always looking for feedback of course.
I don't yet have link-posting rights. Could someone do me a big favor and comment with links to both parts of A Good Man's Just Reward?
Thank you.