I loved this poem.
"Punk style" is exactly the feel I got from it too. Very raw and painted the scene perfectly.
Great writing Tam!
Yep, it's a stormingly good piece of work, and I rarely read poetry. That doesn't mean I have no frame of reference when I see quality work like this, it's just that very little poetry makes me go "wow" or hooks me enough to get to the end. It's usually quite lovely and/or fairly evocative and/or flowery and/or just reads like hyper-dense Flash fiction broken up with random line breaks. But this... this is dripping with attitude and sex and power.
Well deserved of the EP, Miss Tam. You are a platinum-grade poet.
Please browse my digital bookshelf. In this collection, you can find 111 full stories, 10 micro-stories, and 2 poems with the following features:
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* 21 collaborations.
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Just read it. Fucking love it.
Very well deserved. You da shit, Tams.
Absolutely gushed over that amazing piece as soon as I read it and want to congratulate you, Tamara, for a much deserved EP ❤️
It is just a stunning piece of writing Tam, so evocative as an ode to the attraction of subversive courtship. So well done and I love that you are on a roll with your writing.
Yay Tam! Congratulations, excellent poem, for a more than worthy writer.
This is really an excellent poem, and I am not a big poetry reader. Fully deserving of the coveted EP!