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My Character Flaw Ch 2

"My cousin's character flaw."

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My name is Brent Collins. Let me tell you about my cousin John.

 

I can’t remember when I started to hate him, not for certain. But I do know it started when we were both pretty young.

 

When I was eighteen John’s dad gave him a car. I remember it well because I was so jealous. My dad told me if I wanted a car I would have to pay for it myself. Considering I didn’t have any money or a job to make any, well, that finished off that dream.

 

Anyway, I guess John felt a little bad for me because he used to take me with him when he would go to the Paradise. Paradise Alley was a kicking discotheque! All the girls used to go there and man did they look groovy! Tight bellbottoms, platform shoes and next to nothing on top.

 

Sequins were big in those days and a lot of the girls' tops were made of this shimmery material. It looked good and it glittered when the disco ball started spinning. Also hardly any of them wore bras so you could see their titties bouncing every which way when they danced. Sometimes you could even see their nipples right through the fabric. I used to watch them on the dance floor jiggling and shaking all over the place. Man, it made my mouth water!

 

There was one girl named Candy.

 

Candy was the grooviest chick I knew. She was pretty and man did she look slick in her white bellbottoms. They were so tight you could see her bottom jiggling with every step she took. And that shimmery top she liked to wear, hung loose on her. It showed plenty of cleavage and her boobs used to bounce around whenever she did anything!

 

I liked Candy and I asked her out once. I think she was about to burst out laughing but she didn’t, at least not much. She told me that she would never consider going out with anyone who couldn’t dance.

 

Well, I couldn’t dance. Not even a little bit.

 

I asked John if he could teach me and he did laugh. He said he never knew how to dance and he didn’t have any plans to start anytime soon.

 

So what could I do? The next day I went to see Saturday Night Fever. I watched that movie at least twenty times. John Travolta was so cool in that! And those dance moves he made were awesome!

 

I started mowing lawns to earn some money. When I had a small stake, I went to a dance class and learned how to dance just like John Travolta. It took a while but I did it. I ditched the horn-rimmed glasses and got some contact lenses. Then I bought myself some groovy white bellbottoms and some white platform shoes and a white shirt and black vest. If you didn’t look too closely at my face, you’d swear you were watching Tony Marino walk toward you!

 

The night, I made my debut at the Paradise. I got on that dance floor and blew everyone away. Love To Love You Baby was playing and I oozed across that dance floor like I was made to do it. When the DJ started playing Staying Alive I was on fire!

 

Everyone in the place started clapping their hands to the music and stood back to watch. They gave me the whole dance floor and I owned it for the next three minutes. I tell you, John Travolta would have been proud if he’d seen me boogieing away!

 

When the song ended, I looked to the corner where I’d seen Candy but she wasn’t there. I searched the whole place for her and someone told me she went outside.

 

When I got to the parking lot I saw my cousin’s car in the back corner. The disco music was pounding out of the small car stereo and the windows were all steamed up.

 

The back door opened and I hid behind a Cadillac a few cars over. He got out of the back seat with this big shit-eating grin on his face. Candy followed him out then pushed him back against the fender. Then she got on her knees in front of him and did something I’d never seen before. She took his cock right into her mouth and sucked on it! Then after he shot his load she took it all in and swallowed it! She grinned and I could see the spunk oozing between her teeth.

 

I was in shock!

 

She started giggling and crawled back into the back seat again. John followed her and pulled her bellbottoms down to her knees. He bundled both her legs in his arms and held them against his chest. Then Candy let out a shriek of delight! I ran over to the opposite side of the car and peeked in and my eyes went wide.

 

He was porking right there on the back seat!

 

I could see his dick sliding in and out of her pussy and she was loving it!

 

For a moment I was digging it too. I’d never seen her pussy before. It was really hairy and it looked amazing!

 

John had pushed her sequins top up and her tits were on full display. They jiggled every time he pushed into her. Her eyes were wide open and her mouth too. She was panting for breath and her chest and face were flushed red.

 

Then it hit me. She was fucking my cousin John! Not only did his dad give him a car, now he was fucking the girl of my dreams in it.

 

I used to think that Candy was a nice girl that any guy would be lucky to have. Then I saw her for what she really was. She was nothing more than a cock sucking whore that swallows cum.

 

The next day I tossed my new clothes into a storage box and shoved them into my attic. I didn’t even look at them again for months.

 

About a week after watching Candy fuck John in the parking lot I saw him heading to her house for the sixth time in as many days.

 

When I walked toward his car I saw Candy’s cousin, Cindy, who was the same age as her. Man, was she cute! Almost as cute as Candy! She was wearing skin-tight hot pants and an equally tight T-shirt. Her nipples were hard and pushing out against her paper-thin shirt. She and her mom lived in the same house with Candy and her family. Apparently her mom divorced her dad or something.

 

“Hey Brent!” she called out.

 

I almost jumped out of my skin! I didn’t know she was so close and she snuck up on me from a path that led to her backyard.

 

“Oh, uh, hi Cindy,” I said, trying to recover from the shock.

 

“What you doing?” she asked.

 

“Nothing,” I said nervously.

 

This could get difficult if she asked too many questions.

 

“Isn’t that your cousin John’s car?” she asked.

 

“Um, yeah,” I stammered, “I was just, you know, looking to see where he’d gone. I was, like, passing by and I saw it here and, um—“

 

“I know where he is,” she said with a grin, “Same place he’s been every day this week. He’s with Candy and they’re up to something in the back loft.”

 

“Really?” I said with a slight squeak to my voice.

 

“Yeah!” she said, “You want to come and see? They’ll never even know we were there!”

 

I gulped hard and Cindy pressed her tiny tits against my chest.

 

“Come on!” she said, “Let’s go watch!”

 

She took my hand and I followed her in a daze. She led me down the path and through a stand of trees that went right up to the window. She put a finger to her lips and shushed me, then she led me silently to a large window that looked into the back loft of the house.

 

When we got to the window she moved to hide behind one of the window frames. They were thick polished oak things you could hide a car behind!

 

I stood behind her and she bent over to look into the window. I bent over her back and looked to see what was going on inside.

 

John and Candy were lying on the couch kissing. They were both running their tongues around each other. Then John put a hand on her boob. I thought sure she was going to bat it away but she didn’t. She lifted her shirt a bit and pushed his hand inside.

 

Cindy gasped and her little behind pushed against my groin. I couldn’t help myself! I got hard in an instant. She looked over her shoulder at me with her mouth open and I shrugged. Then she grinned and ground her little bum against me.

 

Then we went back to watching the action inside.

 

By now Candy’s shirt was on the floor. She wasn’t wearing a bra so I could see her tits. John was sucking on one of her nipples and she was holding the back of his head and moaning. Then he slipped the fly from her jeans down and she giggled. She raised her butt and he slid those jeans right off her. She wasn’t wearing panties either! Her hairy pussy came into view and Cindy gasped again. I could only stare and my cock got really hard.

 

I put my hands on the front of Cindy’s chest and she gave me a kind of hesitant look. I gulped again but she smiled and pushed my hands inside her shirt, just like Candy had done with John.

 

I was in heaven. I was holding my first set of tits and she wasn’t pushing me away!

 

When we turned back to watch John and Candy he did something I never even imagined. He pushed his face between her legs and started burrowing like a rabbit in a hole. Candy reacted so violently to what he was doing, I thought she was having a seizure.

 

She clutched at his head and squeaked. Then she ground her pussy into his face like she couldn’t get enough.

 

Cindy shuddered right then and ground her bum against me. I put my hand into the front of her hot pants and she pushed it all the way in until I brushed against the hair on her pussy. I felt around a little bit and found the wet spot. When I put my finger in there she groaned and put her hand on the front of my pants.

 

I stopped what I was doing and she unzipped my fly. When she pulled my rock hard cock out, I almost passed out.

 

“Put your finger in!” she hissed.

 

I did what she asked and she started running her hand along the length of my dick. The only one ever to have done that to me before was me. It felt fantastic! Her cunt was so wet and warm on my finger I thought I might cream right then!

 

She moaned and turned to kiss me. Then she peeled my shirt over my head and pushed my pants and underwear down to my ankles. I was practically naked!

 

I pulled her hot pants down and she pushed her bum against me. When she guided my cock to her pussy I pushed it in but it wouldn’t go very far.

 

“Push harder!” Cindy moaned.

 

I was confused but I tried again. She grunted and pushed back against me. Then I felt something give. She bit her lip and made a squeaking sound. She put her hand against my stomach and looked back at me. I could tell by her expression she was in pain.

 

I looked down and gasped. There was blood trickling down the back of her thigh. I looked a little closer and saw blood on my dick too.

 

She sucked in a breath and laid a hand on my arm.

 

“Do it!” she hissed, “Push it in!”

 

I shoved my cock back inside going slow. Then this big smile spread across her face and she pushed back against me.

 

“Keep going!” she said with a giggle.

 

Then I was fucking her!

 

Oh my God, I was fucking her! She was grinding her pussy against me and making these little grunting sounds with each push. I never thought anything could feel so good! I grabbed her tits again and screwed her for all I was worth. She was moving her little bum against my cock and really digging it.

 

When I came, Cindy turned around with a start and looked down.

 

“Are you finished?” she asked.

 

I had closed my eyes but I nodded. I was in heaven!

 

“Can you do it again?” she asked impatiently.

 

I opened my eyes and saw she wasn’t very happy.

 

My cock had gone soft and slipped out of her cunt. She was rubbing it and trying to make it hard again. That was when I panicked. I couldn’t get it up!

 

She kept on stroking and massaging it but she looked inside and saw Candy sucking John’s cock. He was really hard! Cindy looked at me urgently and then fell to her knees. She put my cock in her mouth and I felt myself getting hard again.

 

Wow! I never imagined what that could feel like. I got as hard as I ever had been. Cindy smiled and lay down on her back.

 

“Do it!” she whispered, “Do it now!”

 

I got on my knees and pushed it inside her again and my eyes rolled into the back of my head. Cindy clamped her arms around me and then her legs. I was thrusting into her and we could hear John and Candy fucking just a few feet away. Candy was oohing and ahhing and I could feel her hot breath on my ear.

 

When I came, Cindy gave me a withering look.

 

“Again?” she said, “You came again?”

 

I didn’t know what to say so I didn’t say anything.

 

She pushed me off of her and looked down at her pussy. There was a white fluid drooling out of her and a red stain on her thighs and in her sparse pubic hair.

 

She shook her head angrily and wiped at herself as best she could. Then she grabbed my shirt off the ground. She balled it up and used it to clean the stains away from her groin. Then she tossed the dirty shirt at me.

 

She pulled her hot pants up and tucked her shirt in and glared at me.

 

“You’re hopeless!” she said.

 

I got up and pulled my pants up and looked at her. I wanted to say something but she didn’t look like she was in the mood to talk. So I left. My shirt was hopelessly stained so I didn’t bother putting it back on. I just carried it with me as I wandered slowly back to the roadside.

 

This should have been one of the highlights of my young life! I lost my virginity! But here I was walking away with my head down and feeling about as badly as anyone could.

 

I was almost to the end of the path through the woods when I heard John shout.

 

“Whoa!” he said.

 

I ducked down and peeked through the bushes. I saw John standing by the car with the door open. Cindy was walking toward him and giggling.

 

“I know what you’ve been doing,” she said.

 

“What are you talking about, Cindy?” John replied as he looked Cindy’s body up and down.

 

“I saw you!” she said with a sort of sing-song voice.

 

“Saw me what?” John replied with a knowing grin.

 

She looked from side to side and I ducked further into the bushes.

 

“I saw your thing!” she whispered and broke down in giggles, "You and Candy were doing it!”

 

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John gave her a smarmy grin and put his hand on the bulge in his pants.

 

“Would you like to see it up close?” he said, “I’ll show you.”

 

“You can’t!” she said and burst into laughter.

 

“Why not,” he said and pulled his dick out.

 

Her eyes went wide and she stared at it like she’d never seen one before. She’d just seen mine! I couldn’t figure out why she looked so stunned at seeing his. Sure it was bigger than mine but what’s that got to do with anything?

 

He took her hand and put it on his dick. She started stroking it just like she did with mine but this time was different. With me she did it like it was the first one she’d touched. Now she was stroking his with a big grin and leaning down to see it up close. It looked to me like she was loving it!

 

Then John put his hands on her shoulders and she went to her knees. He lined his dick up with her mouth and shoved it inside.

 

Did she pull back? No. Did she spit it out and tell him to get lost? No! She started sucking on it like it was her favorite lollipop!

 

I mean, what the hell? She was my girl! I just lost my virginity to her. And I’m pretty sure she was a virgin when we did it too!

 

After she got it good and wet, he lifted her up and bent her over the hood of his car. He whipped her hot pants down and started fucking her.

 

I couldn’t help myself. I got hard! I took my own dick out and started whacking off. Even if she was my girl, seeing her grind and groan against his big cock was getting me horny all over again.

 

Then she squealed just like Candy did when we were watching them fuck

 

“Ooooooooh!” she moaned in a throaty voice.

 

I came too when I heard her.

 

John picked her up and kissed her and she started telling him how much she loved him. He said he loved her too and spread her legs and fucked her again. Apparently Cindy loved it so much she started crying and moaning about how she would be his lover any time he wanted.

 

I came again right about then. What can I say? It was something else!

 

Cindy screamed out with pleasure and promised him again and again that she’d never tell Candy what they’d done.

 

Then she pulled up her hot pants and ran back into the house as fast as she could go. John was laughing as she left. He zipped up his pants and got into the car. The loud disco music started blasting and he drove away with that same shit-eating grin he always had.

 

God, I hated John!

 

A few days later I was sitting on the front porch at my house. We lived right next door to John and his family.

 

I heard some kind of commotion and then saw Candy walking away from his house really quickly. She had her head down and was doing her best not to look at anyone. The way she looked I think she didn’t want anyone to look at her either.

 

I’m not sure what I was planning to do, but I followed her. When she got to her place she looked over her shoulder and saw me. I gulped but I went to talk to her.

 

Candy looked really mad.

 

“Hi Candy,” I said, “What’s going on?”

 

She shook her head and pinched the bridge of her nose with her fingers.

 

“It’s nothing, Brent,” she said with a sigh, “Why are you following me?

 

“I wasn’t—,” I started to say but the grimace on her face told me she knew it was a lie.

 

I sighed and looked down at the ground.

 

“I saw you leaving John’s place,” I said lamely, “You looked angry. I thought I’d try to, like, cheer you up.”

 

She stared at me and took a breath then I saw tears forming in her eyes.

 

“It’s nothing, Brent,” she said.

 

“It’s not nothing!” I said, suddenly more assertive than I’d ever been, “It’s John! He’s not a nice guy you know. You deserve better than him.”

 

She touched my cheek with her fingers and smiled.

 

“You’re sweet,” she said.

 

“I’m serious!” I said angrily, “He’s a dick! Ask Cindy!”

 

“Cindy?” she said with surprise, “What’s she got to do with it?”

 

I let out a breath and pushed the anger in me down a little.

 

“Just ask her,” I said, “She knows!”

 

Candy’s mom called out that she had a phone call and she went into the house. I stood staring at the place for a while and then I left.

 

A few days later I went outside and saw John. He grinned at me and leaned against his car.

 

“I guess you can have Candy now,” he said.

 

“What do you mean?” I asked suspiciously.

 

“I think we just broke up,” he said, “Now she’s all yours.”

 

I never did get Candy. She had been ruined by my cousin John. But she wasn’t the only one! I never got Cindy again either. And there were more!

 

Later that year, I went to college. I found out that Candy was going to the same school and I looked her up.

 

“Hi Candy!” I said when she opened the door to her house.

 

“Brent!” she said with surprise, “What are you doing here?”

 

“I’m going to school here,” I said.

 

She let me in and led me to the kitchen. There were two other girls in there. Candy told me they were her roommates.

 

“Brent, this is Tracy and Amanda,” she said.

 

Amanda was a tall girl with short-cropped hair and a severe look on her face. She barely looked at me. She gave me a cursory glance and nodded then looked away. Tracy was kind of a mousey looking girl. She had on thick glasses and was wearing baggy clothes but she was cute! She looked at me and a funny expression crossed her face. To me, it looked like she hadn’t met many boys.

 

“Are you going to this school too?” Tracy asked.

 

“Yeah,” I said with a grin, “I’m studying veterinary medicine.”

 

“Veterinary?” she said with wide eyes, “Do you like animals?”

 

“I love animals,” I said.

 

“I’m going to, um, run some errands,” Candy said with a smirk.

 

I didn’t know why she looked that way but then she was gone. Amanda frowned and left the room too.

 

Apparently Tracy wasn’t sure why the other girls were acting so weird either because she gave them an odd look.

 

“What’s with them?” I asked.

 

Tracy shrugged and led me to the living room. She’d just made tea so we sat and drank tea together for hours. She was trying to decide between veterinary medicine and zoology for her major. She said she would decide next semester.

 

By the time I left the house, I was in love! I think Tracy felt something too because she was blushing and giggling a lot. I met her at the library almost every night for a week. I even go to kiss her on the fourth night. We both kept our eyes open and stared at each other in amazement.

 

There was no tongue involved, but still, it was pretty hot!

 

It’s funny. After I met Tracy I forgot all about trying to catch up with Candy.

 

Anyway, I went to the library like usual to do some research. I looked around but I couldn’t see Tracy anywhere. So I sat down at one of the long tables in the reference section to do my work.

 

A little while later I heard a familiar voice. I looked up with a start and saw my cousin John walking to the stairs leading up to the shelves in the upper levels. What was worse was Tracy was with him! She was following him like a loyal dog with her eyes wide and her face flushed.

 

Not again!

 

I packed up my book bag and followed them.

 

On the fourth floor, there was hardly anyone. I crept around until I saw them in between some of the shelves. I saw they were whispering to each other but I couldn’t hear. I sneaked into the next aisle and then went to the corner of the aisle where they were standing.

 

“You’re amazing, Tracy!” John said and then he kissed her.

 

I thought sure she’d push him away but she threw her arms around his neck and kissed him back. I could hear the smushing sounds of their necking and I moaned in frustration.

 

Then he pushed her baggy slacks down to her knees and whipped his cock out. She just looked at it with great big eyes. He pushed her thighs apart and slid it into her cunt as easy as you please. She grunted in pain for a second and looked down at herself in alarm.

 

Then I saw it. She was bleeding. She was a virgin right up until two seconds ago!

 

John kissed her again and she clung to him like Spiderman!

 

He started fucking her then and she was going crazy. The bookshelf started rocking and she was spreading her legs wide apart to let him in.

 

What could I do? I pulled my own dick out and started whacking off! I still liked Tracy but watching her get a good fucking was something else!

 

John grunted and pushed himself in hard and she moaned. She looked like she was about to fall over. John steadied her on her feet and smiled as he put his dick back in his pants.

 

“Thanks!” he said, “See you later!”

 

Then he was gone.

 

Tracy was breathing hard and still leaning back against the shelf. I tucked my cock back into my pants and walked around the corner.

 

“That’s my cousin John,” I said, “He’s a dick!”

 

Tracy gave a start and pulled her slacks up quickly.

 

“Brent!” she shrieked, “What are you doing here?”

 

“I followed you when I saw John,” I said with a grimace.

 

“Were you watching us?” she asked with disgust, “That is sick!”

 

“Yes, I watched you,” I said with a sigh, “Just like I watched John with Candy and her cousin Cindy years ago.  He was doing both of them at the same time you know. Candy dumped him when she found out. So did Cindy after Candy told her what a bitch she was.”

 

“What?” Tracy asked in confusion.

 

“John was fucking Candy years ago,” I said, “Then he started fucking her cousin right under her nose. It’s what he does. Forget about anything he might have said. He just wanted to fuck you.”

 

“Don’t use that vulgar language please!” she spat.

 

“It doesn’t matter how I say it,” I said, “It doesn’t change the truth.”

 

Tracy started whimpering and I put my arms around her. She cried against my shoulder for a while and then I walked her home. We went right to Candy and Tracy told her everything that happened. Candy got really quiet and her breath hissed in and out of her nose.

 

“That guy is such a dick!” she said in a quiet voice.

 

“He is,” I agreed.

 

She frowned and looked at me angrily.

 

“I think you should leave,” she said.

 

I opened my mouth to protest but she shushed me and showed me to the door.

 

“Tell your cousin I never want to see him again!” she said and slammed the door.

 

I wanted to tell her I was on her side but she never gave me a chance. Instead, I walked away from that door with my head down and feeling like shit warmed over.

 

It was then I decided enough was enough. I went to John’s house the very next day. I wanted to confront him about how he’d ruined every woman I’d ever felt anything for.

 

As I approached his house I saw this really tall redhead walking out of the complex where he lived. She was something else! She was wearing this schoolgirl type plaid skirt but the figure underneath it was all woman. She looked and walked like a model!

 

Just as she got to the sidewalk, this huge guy jumped out of a beat-up old car and started yelling at her. It was weird though. He was talking in some foreign language that I’d never heard before. She answered him in the same language and she started crying. She pointed back at the housing complex and he shoved her into the car. Then he stalked toward the houses and disappeared.

 

Thinking the drama was done for now I went into the complex and found John’s place. I was about to knock on his door when the big fellow tapped me on the shoulder.

 

“Do you know where John Collins lives?” he asked in a gruff voice.

 

He had a really thick Irish accent and I could tell he was really angry.

 

“Wh—” I stammered nervously, “What do you want with him?”

 

The man scowled and narrowed his eyes.

 

“The wee bastard is just after takin’ me girl!” he hissed, “And I intends to teach ’im a lesson!”

 

“Oh!” I said with a grin.

 

I figured if anyone could teach my cousin the lesson he needed it would be this guy.

 

I nodded and knocked on John’s door. A few minutes later it opened and the Irish giant stepped forward and shouted something in that strange foreign language he’d used. Then he laid John out with one punch.

 

I watched all this unfold with a big smile.

 

Then the man pinned a note to John’s chest. It looked like a flag or something.

 

He stood up. Nodded at me and stalked away grumbling and mumbling to himself. I looked down at John once more and followed the big man out whistling a happy tune as I went.

 

I never saw Tracy again after that. Well, that’s not true, I did see her. I saw her walking along the riverbank with Amanda. The bigger girl was holding Tracy’s hand and they sat down together on the bank. Then they started kissing. And I mean kissing! They were kissing like lovers and Amanda was feeling Tracy’s boobs and everything.

 

They went into some bushes and I followed them. I couldn’t help myself.

 

When I got there I saw Tracy had pulled her baggy slacks off and Amanda was licking her between her legs. It was the same thing I’d seen John do to Candy all those years ago. Tracy was loving it too! She had her hands in Amanda’s short-cropped hair and was moaning like a bitch in heat.

 

Suddenly, she arched her back and made this oohing sound, the same one she’d made when John was fucking her in the library. I realized she was having an orgasm. She clamped her thighs around Amanda’s neck and then lay back like she was completely spent.

 

After that Amanda pulled her tights off and crawled up to straddle Tracy’s face. Then she was moaning and writhing while Tracy licked her. Of course, I had my dick out and was whacking off again. I just had to!

 

Amanda started panting and grinding her cunt against Tracy’s mouth. I could hear Tracy mumbling and gasping for breath. I think she was beginning to be smothered. Then Amanda pushed hard against her and froze with her hands in Tracy’s hair and her face turned to the sky. The throaty moan she let out almost sounded like a moose. Still, it was enough to push me over the edge. I came all over my hand with a tiny whimper of my own.

 

The two girls pulled their clothes back on and walked away hand in hand. I crouched in the bushes and waited for them to leave.

 

I guess I’ll never get Tracy now either!

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