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Wonder

"How can this be?"

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Can anyone explain to me
How someone that I cannot see
Can take my heart so totally
So utterly complete

How someone that I cannot hear
Can, without ever being near
warm up my soul and ease the fear
And sense just what I need

Can anybody shed some light
On why it always feels so right
To talk online so late at night
Of what we're dreaming of

I cannot help but wonder why
She fills my heart so much that I
Believe sometimes that I can fly
Away on wings of love
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Written by patokl
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Comments

Unknown User
This is something I think many of us can relate to. The first two stanzas in particuar. Thank you so much for sharing patokl. Sinner xx
Simple yet so beautiful. I loved it x
My small gesture of apology... Very well written and such lovely artistry with words.
No apology needed Jamie, glad you like it
It's simple and beautiful, elegant!
This is eloquent and magnificent. Wish we could see more of your work!
Unknown User
it's mind boggling, isn't it? Love really can blossom in cyberspace
I agree with below and we will always wonder. Can we be a truer version of ourselves without fear online? A question that I know I can't answer. Lovely work. Thank you.
So beautiful, I echo what Chica said, we are always looking, and it seems here we will find that.. Maybe... Love this for a lot of reasons..
That was so charming.
Quite eloquent and asks the question so many of us ponder. Very nicely crafted work!
A beautiful and lovely poem. On-line fills the voids in our lives. Sending you a five...xo
Beautiful poem expressing of what love can do so completely ... Excellent writing