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The Greatest Gift

"For My Mr Driven"

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The greatest of gifts 
I’ve ever received 
Is the gift of you
Of how you love me 

We met just by chance
A few emails exchanged 
Soon we were friends
Our banter began

The connection was immediate
As our conversation flowed
You just seemed familiar
Like someone I’d known

Our friendship accelerated 
Our phone calls were frequent
Our chats lasted hours 
Never an awkward moment

You knew right away
I was your missing piece 
The one that your soul
Had been endlessly seeking

It took me some time 
To believe in our fate 
To trust my instincts
To follow your lead 

Very soon I would know
What you’d known all along
Our love was forever 
Our souls were like one

Every day now
Many months later
I am so very grateful
For your love ever after 

The way that you love me
So raw, so real
Your roughness, tenderness
I swear I can feel 

I love you so much
My words can’t portray 
The way my heart swells
More and more every day 

Your gift of love
On our incredible journey
Is the most beautiful 
Of anything I've ever encountered

I love you, my man
Our journey's just begun 
I look forward to forever 
Of being your one true love



 

 

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Comments

Unknown User
Thank you my love. This is touching beyond words. What we share is so pure, raw and exciting. You are my heart and soul. ❤
I’m so happy you like it honey. I wrote it for you, inspired by you ❤️
Such a beautiful poem, you feel your love in every written word
Thanks so much Roger! Very much appreciate your time and comments.
A very sweet and beautiful poem Pix !.... I'm glad I took the time to read and support your work.... Great work friend !
Thank you my friend. Your support is very much appreciated. I’m happy you liked it ?
Such an amazing and wonderfully expressive poem! So glad you have found your true love...so invigorating and climatic, wonderful and heart warming...thanks for sharing, your Peach
Thank you Peach. Your kind words and time are very much appreciated.
Awwwwww, so glad I saw this and read it. What a wonderful tribute to an obviously great person! So happy for both of you dear friend :) Great job!!
Thank you! Very sweet of you my friend. Very much appreciate your support ?
I’d love to tell someone I once knew, the poem you have written. Id love to possess that ability to communicate so beautifully, so concisely, but, so not me. The other half of my problem is that the one person I’d want to hear it is gone from my life. Gone without a word or a trace.. which i regret more than everything else. But still I hope and still I’m glad that I was able to read your beautiful poem. Thank you
Thank you so much for your very kind words. Write the poem! Write it for you ~ express your feelings best you can even if the object of your love won’t see it. It’s very therapeutic ?
Simply Beautifully.
Thank you so much! Such kind words are very flattering coming from such an accomplished and decorated author as yourself. Very much appreciated ?
Well done Pixie, very beautiful poem!
Thank you my friend ?
Very nice tribute of your feelings with BD, may your fire have a lasting warmth that keeps you both coming back for more ?
Thank you my friend! Very much appreciate your kind words and time taken to read and comment ?
Unknown User
Awwwwwww I have enjoyed watching you on this journey and seeing the changes in you lol you’re still a very fun pixie friend but now I see you glow with true happiness!!! Love this sweet poem (bh)
Thank you my friend. Very sweet and kind of you [bh]
Well done and happy for you both.
Thank you Tony. Very much appreciate you taking time to read and comment ?
Unknown User
You expression of love is beautifully done here. What a great poem. You are both lucky, and I am lucky to know you.
Thank you my sweet friend. I appreciate your kind words. Yes ~ Ryan and I are both very lucky and I am doubly so to have a friend like you!
What a beautiful poem of Love. So enchanting, so real, so passionate.
Thank you so much for your kind words. Truly appreciate your time taken to read and comment ?
Unknown User
beautifully worded and full of love... well done!
Thank you John. I appreciate your kind words and your time for reading and commenting ?
Pixie!!!!!!! Your poem is Beautiful just as I said it would be. You have done a wonderful job in expressing your Love through your words. I'm so Happy that you took the chance to post it. Mr. Driven is one Lucky man. Thank you for sharing your most innermost thoughts :)
Thank you so much my dear friend! Your help and encouragement means a lot! ? I think I am the lucky one to have Ryan and a friend like you! ?
It is heart felt love at its best 6/5
Thank you my friend. I appreciate you reading and commenting?
Pixie this is beautiful writing! Great job! :)
Thanks so much Tim! I truly appreciate your time and kind words ?
This was beautiful and wonderfully poignant. It flowed so nicely and I felt your love for him....???
Thank you my friend. Very flattering coming from such an accomplished writer as yourself. ?
Very beautiful Pixie. It is awesome to find that one true love, and who would have thought in a place like Lush. But I for one can say, it does work.. So happy for you and Driven.. This is something for him always to treasure.
Thank you so much Simmie. I appreciate you reading and commenting, especially when you know first hand. ~hugs~
You write beautifully! And You show so much heart and soul in this! Driven is lucky <3
This is absolutely beautiful… Such a beautiful gift of love,,, Always , <3 Carolyn.
Thank you so much Carolyn. It is a beautiful gift. I am very lucky ?
You write beautifully! And You show so much heart and soul in this! Driven is lucky <3
Awe thank you so much my sweet friend! Thank you for helping too. I appreciate you so much! Though I do think I am the lucky one ? ~hugs~
Your poetry speaks volumes about the love you share with your Mr.
Thank you so much my friend. Thank you for your help too. All very much appreciated ?
This was lovely. It's not every day you find that connection.
Thanks so much for reading and commenting MollyDoll. And yes, I am very lucky ?