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Haiku

"Clitoral bell chimes; Master's tongue pleasuring me; In Haiku style verse."

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Haiku

 

Haiku is a Japanese poetic form dating from the 16 th Century. It was adopted by some Anglo-American poets in the mid 19 th Century and gained a level of poetic popularity with the advent of modernism in the 1 st two decades of the 20 th Century.

In its Anglicised form a Haiku Poem consists of three lines of five, seven and five syllables. I have written a series of Haiku Verses to convey a brief tale.

Thank you for reading. I hope it doesn’t prove too disappointing.

Arms crossed behind
Heeled feet spread shoulder wide
Available me

Creamy spread thighs part
Moist humid urgent desire
Stiff nub pulsating

Smooth pink inviting
Flower petals swollen wet
Arousal beads hang

Tongue exploring flesh
Saliva trails, throbbing skin
Synapses shiver

Clitoris aflame
Trapped between cruel pincers
Bell tinkles joyous

Dangling bell swatted
Clacker tinkling as I cum
Sensation burning

Poor suffering me
Abused delightfully
For Master’s pleasure

Soft tongue extended
Such a delicate teasing
Sodden wet pussy

Douse the scorching flames
Erect clit, saliva cool
Swirling, flicking tongue

Breath lost in dry throat
Squeezed eyeballs, blinded sight
Breasts heave for release

Please Master please
Please may I cum Master please
Wait obedient

Spiralling desire
Sensation overloading
Thighs quiver, knees fail

Hanging bell soaked
Pulsating pussy awash
Tongue flicks one more time

Permission granted
Glorious wondrous release
Super Nova white

Arms encircling me
Racing heart, hot flushed face
His loving embrace

I have been Cum Girl
This is Haiku poetry
Harder than it looks

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Comments

For me, your words create lovely images. It is rare to experience a supa nova.
It's a long time since I've read this. Whilst some are beautiful in their balance and resonate in their meaning, a few do feel a bit clunky and given that the essence of Haiku is to capture meaning in 3 lines I'm less enamoured of the concept than perhaps I was at the time. Thank you very much for reading and your kind comment xxx
I love writing haiku (I find when I start it becomes very difficult to stop), and so it's good to find some on here (surprisingly little). I loved these - there was a rawness about them which to me added to the wonderful filthiness of them!
I probably ought to write some more. Though finding the right 'story' that lends itself to telling by haiku is often as challenging as writing the haiku themselves. Thank you very much for reading and for your kind comment xxx
I knew if I looked long enough I would find something like this. I used the Haiku multiple verses for a poem and thoroughly enjoyed it. Reading yours was excellent. The form is challenging and getting a story across in such a way is seriously entertaining! Thanks!
What I particularly enjoy about Haiku is the exactitude; 5/7/5; it requires both great control and a flexibility of word usage and sentence construction. There is also a joy in capturing meaning in so few words xxx
Cum Girl - you definitely met the challenge. Make certain you encourage readers to read aloud! Much better than within the mind. Thank you! Please let me know when you do more
Nicely done, CumGirl. Great story, all within haiku's tight restraints.
Excellent writing CG.
enjoyed it very much!
A cool summer breeze, nipples turgid and aroused, aching for a touch
Excellent CumGirl! Great writing!
Disappointing...NOT. A delicate teasing of the mind. Lovely. TY
Good attempt in Haiku.
wow ..love it..definately a fan