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Comments

CurlyGirly

Some of the best things come in small packages. Very well done!

HK4167

It's really really beautifully written. Wonderful piece.

Iszofia

U can re read & re read it and each time it evokes different emotions. Eloquently written. Well Done!

LadyX

thanks, Maggie, I really enjoy that.

DirtyMartini

I have to admit I like Mr. Knight's comment "For a poem, that was not bad"...obviously the man took lessons in flattery...you know sometimes you can judge the success of a piece by the quality of the comments it generates, and in this case you're an unqualified success...and yeah, you couldn't have done it alone...

sprite

i find it's hard to write something that, with just a few words, says so much. somehow, you managed. extraordinary.

Fugly

I hate leaving comments as I never know what to write that others before me haven't already conveyed, so all I will say is 'Loved it!'

TopThis

Very nice!

ArtMan

Very nicely done!

Catnip

This is a poem that would fit very well in a paperback, lying on the night stand. Once in a while it'd be read and remind the people out there what it's all about. I can fit this poem not only to a relationship between two, but the humanity itself.

ibee

We Like! TY

Princess4Jim

Wow hun, that was beautiful. I Love it!

DLizze

I like it, and I like that it closes on a positive note, rather than a negative one. From the title, I was so afraid it was going to be another "downer", that went the other way.