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Foundation

Going through the motions,
with no ending in sight.
One looks toward the heavens,
in the hope for insight.

The sun rays cast down,
as the earth hesitates.
It struggles, it breaks,
Yes, ... even making mistakes.

Wait, start over,
holding the line.
Achieving the outcome,
that becomes one's in time.

Remember to nourish,
shelter and love.
This is the foundation,
for what you feel deprived of.

If taken for granted,
one could be left all alone.
You need to work on this together,
not on one's own.

So, if you wonder what happened,
what could have been.
Did you listen ... Have compassion?
You need that from within.

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Written by AngelHeart01
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Comments

This is a beautifully written poem. Your words are very emotional and lovely..5
Very nice Meg
Another wonderful and emotional poem. The line that captured me was "If taken for granted, one could be left alone" which I feel so much personally. Have such a beautiful way for describing feelings.
Beautifully written, Maggie! Thank you for reminding all of us, that true "Foundation" is what holds together Life, itself!
Beautiful and lots of emotion.
This is most excellent!
This is beautifully written!
compassion,You need that from within.Sure, we need compassion from within and that comes from the emtions of love. Humanity is based on love & love alone.
Beautiful. I loved it
Maggie Very beautiful poem, thank you
I'm not sure how i missed this when it was published. so lyrical and beautiful and very very sweet. wonderful words of wisdom.
great poem....wise beyond your years
these would be great song lyrics. tune up that mandolin!
A wonderful read
Meggie,

very beautiful poem, thank you...
Meg, outstanding job, you are an amazing poet! Please keep them coming. I love the honesty and emotion!
amazing job angelheart! please keep writing.
Yep, when things get difficult you have to look at the foundation to not lose sight of it all, or lose it completely. Great job, twinkles. Hope you write some more.
Great job again meggie!
It takes a certain type of insight and heart to write something like this. I liked it, good job angelheart.
Loved it... building the foundation for what is to come can be both challenging and rewarding. You captured the sentiment perfectly.