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Controlled Rain

"How it feels to claim a collar"

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Author's Notes

"An attempt to explain how it feels to claim that first pet. Dedicated to alyssa, for more than words can say, thank you and I hope you never regret that decision."

It was raining before but it isn't now.
I remember when I met you for the first time
It was raining hard, the sky was grey,
There was a spark between us in a moment
We talked of everything and nothing neither wanting this to end.
We tumbled into bed together
You asked me to be brutal, it was something that you craved.
I took you at your word and conquered,
Every hole was claimed as My Domain.
You sweetly called me Mistress, I felt an longing to possess,
To own, to control, to reign over you.
Time passed in a manic rush
Each time we met there was an overload
Of energy, excitement and primal lust.
My fingers curled, My teeth bared,
I would claim you as My First.

I looked into the mirror and I muttered,
Would I take this step? Should I dare?
Could I handle what I sought?
The face in the mirror was uncertain ,
To delay that call I dithered.

Why did I beat Myself up so
When every wannabe I saw
could take that step with blind confidence.
I had to cross My Rubicon.

I offered you My collar, then held My breath,
The soft reply, yes my Mistress.
Your breathless words hit Me like a fire truck,
The world spun, the room went out of focus, I was drunk.

This answer softly given, confirmed your quality
In a heartbeat I transformed into your Deity.
You had answered what I'd doubted
Consumed with such relief, I shouted.

When I see you on your knees
Hear you beg to only please
Me in any way I desire
I can feel My heart catch fire.

When you give Me your Devotion
I am overcome with emotion,
With the power that you give Me
I could remake the day.

If the stars went out tonight
And I had you by My side.
I could reignite them with My Will
And just a finger snap.

It's raining once again
But in My heart it's always summer.

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Written by Twisted_Skald
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