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Challenge

"It's not you, it's me"

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You were just

A challenge

That's all you were

To me

I don't think

I liked you much

But wished

You wanted me

And wanting it

So badly

Needing

To prevail

Thinking

Planning

Plotting

Determined not to fail

Upset it was upsetting

I couldn't reel

You in

Approach

After approach

I tried

I wanted so to win

Yet had I really won you

If "we" had come to be

Another one would challenge

And I would set you free

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Written by LaylaJune
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Comments

I love this piece, Layla. There’s a deep melancholic realisation to it that I can relate past memories to. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you - and I am happy to have encountered your work, as well!
Lovely like you Layla. And I like the disclaimer for Ensorceled lol 

Thank you!  And after I posted it I figured I should say something - people often think poems are all autobiographical - as a writer of poetry yourself, you probably are used to that!
You're welcome. I strongly agree! My last poem (Love Loop) was written from a man's perspective but was still associated with me. We give the readers that liberty though. :)
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A nice poem about the capricious workings of the heart.
Poems are written in sentences not lines, and once I'd assembled yours I could hear Emily Dickinson playing in the background. I think you need a comma after 'Upset'.
I like the simple elegance of the closing thought.
Good job.👍
Thank you so much for reading, and for your thoughts.  I intentionally did not have a comma after "upset,"  but I am always interested to hear how other people hear my words in their head.  
  IMHO you
Are in the top 3-5 poets here.  I’m so glad to see you out again ... was
Getting worried about your absence from these pages!! ❤️❤️❤️😊😊😊. Rick
This was very sweet!  It has been a long time since I have written, and Ensorceled did encourage me.  I questioned whether I had anything in me.  Thanks again!
Ah, the chase can be so much more satisfying than the catch, sometimes! I could feel the eagerness and the concomitant concern. Nice!
But I must ask: are you REALLY 153?
I enjoy unusual scenarios - thank you for reading and for your comment.  And no, I'm not 153.  Not even half . . .
Sorry. I thought that since it said that on your profile…
You have a lovely way with words. I hope to see more from you here! 
Thank you so much!  I am working on it!!
There's a story in there that's more intriguing than many 10K word shorts. Brief, but every word and line says something. Lovely poem, Layla.
Thank you very much - I am good keeping it short! 
I'll echo what the previous fella said. Perfect confection of  words and thoughts. Thank you.
Thank you for thanking me.  I hear you are a fan of brevity as well!
I understand this is not about me, but the cats. :)  Flawless meter and rhyme, and the way you express your emotions here is so precise and clear-eyed. I love the way you write.   
Mimi and Wallace believe you have maligned me
By the way, just to be clear - no negative references in any way relate to Ensorceled.  It should not need to be said, but it does.
A feeling we’ve all had, and none of us are proud of, very well articulated. 
Thank you for reading, and for your comment!
A great, short poem with an unexpected direction.  Very interesting and sexy.
Thank you for being my first reader!  Glad you enjoyed my poem.