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Brighter Days

"Reflections on a relationship."

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I hear the words but they don't sink in.
My mind can't hold what you're saying.
Feeling the years, I'm holding back tears.
You're putting a voice to my worst fears.
Days used to be brighter and we could laugh at time.
Years have gone, we're getting on, being old's a crime.

Life burns out in a smoky haze,
It gets shorter as the memories fade.
One door closes, another one shuts,
Banalities fall like cigarette butts.

We'll look back and recall this day,
Nothing left but a worn cliché.
Pretending that there's no regrets,
We'll be lying, you don't forget.
Days used to be brighter and we could laugh at time.
Years have gone, we're getting on, being old's a crime.
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Written by Jack_42
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Well written I must say I really liked this poem of your Jack. I just might have found another poet to follow in Lush
Thanks for your positive feedback. All my poems on here are song lyrics. Here's a definite poem I wrote the first day I started work at electronics factory in the UK. ''Resistors flow in an endless cascade. Spiralled painted and finally made. Bored bottle blondes feed hungry machines. Not know or caring what it all means. The bonus is up and everything's fine as long as they get their overtime. :)
Banalities fall like cigarette butts

What a wonderful line. Great poem, Jack
Really great writing. I think the topic is one that everyone has been through at one point in time. You capture the feeling with your words perfectly. Easy 5
Great job Jack. As always. your subject was very true . You've always had such a way with words.
I liked your poem. You can feel your words and they are very intense. Things like that happen. Very real. Excellent writing. 5
Oh how real!! Very well written, Jack. Thank you so much for sharing.