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You Ain’t Been Loved Right

"Save that coochie for someone that's going to love it right."

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Girl, why you cry’n
‘Cause he done let you go
Spit you out
Fucked you this way
Pulled you that way
And now your heart’s asunder
I ought to slap you
Just like he did
Right up-side your head
But harder

You see the problem is
You ain’t never been loved right
Oh, you done loved
You done gave of yourself
To the point that you can’t give
No more
You done let him handle your
Outside
And rip you open
Inside
You done twisted your mind
Around his little finger
You can’t even think
Of yourself
You so full of him

He ain’t your problem
You your problem
You see
You ain’t never been loved right
‘Cause once a body been loved right
Once a mind been touched
By a heart that can’t live
Without yours
You know things
Things that make your back
Go straight
And your head go high

Or, it can make your back arch
And your legs spread wide
Your coochie moan
His maleness
Strengthening the woman in you
‘Causing you to leak
And I’m not talking about
From your eyes
You won’t have to drop to your knees
‘Cause he’ll be on his already
At the very scent of
What makes you
You
He’ll taste you with hunger
With gratitude
He’ll be able to close his eyes
Pick you out of the crowd
Even if you are half way across the world

You ain’t never had
Someone love you
With a slow hand
Slow eyes
Slow lips
A slow tongue
From beginning to end
Careful of what he says
And more of what he does
‘Cause he don’t just want you
He needs you
Just not for now
Or for tonight
Or even for tomorrow
He needs you next week
Next month
Next year

He’s going to
Experience you
Deeply
With a soft touch
Desperate to feel you pulsate
With the potency of his love
Pumping through you
Like fire
Caught in a backdraft
Healing you
Singeing off those rough endings
Sealing up wounds
And making you want to burn
With this new beginning

He’ll want to
Lay you down
Somewhere soft
In a bed of roses
Even when he can’t
And he’ll apologize
Doing the best he can
‘Cause that’s what his woman deserves
Yes, I said his
He’ll want you to carry his name
Carry his children
Not because he wants to see himself
But he wants to see proof
Of how beautiful it is
To be one with you

The problem is
You ain’t been loved right
And now you crying
Over nothing lost
Wipe your face
Clear your eyes
Hug yourself
Don’t settle for no one
That don’t hug you the same
After you done blessed him
With your attentions
Brace yourself
Be strong
Save your love
For someone
That’s going to love you right

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©AvrgBlkGrl, 2015.

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A great poetic lesson. I love the strength of your female voice in your writing. It's refreshingly kick-ass.
This is a very emotional and very intense poem. Your poetry is always very moving and you kind of get a lesson from reading it. This is a well written and very passionate poem. Your words are very beautiful and take you on a journey right to your core. This is stunning and gorgeous. Sending you a five..xo
yes, yes Professor
beautiful poem
It's perfect. I'm late on this one, but damn. I needed this as a personal booster. I've been there, and don't want to go to that place again. I'm worth it, and your words are just the bolster this chick needs. Can I frame it? Pretty please?
It's incredible how you create such profound wonder, in a very colloquial style. I love it.
The truth in your words touches my fuzzy insides. Thank you for sharing your poet's soul with us.
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One Great Poem!! Well Done!! Hope To See More!!
I don't know how I missed this one. I love the tone of this one. I can almost see her rolling her eyes and shaking her head. Awesome as always my friend!
Love this: "he ain't your problem, You your problem" if only some women could SEE and KNOW it. Thought provoking stuff. Xxxooo
Healing you
'Cause that's what his woman deserves

If you said nothing else, that said it all. You have put it down, girl, and told the world how a man should love a woman.
I wish everyone could read this and take it to heart. You have written not merely words, but have written a truth we should all take to heart. Your intelligence of life and love, of relationships, never ceases to amaze me. Well done girl.
Awe inspiring and simply stunning work.
You get it! And you pass it along! Women should be empowering of each other in this way. Not what we are always doing wrong, but how we can do it right! Beautiful message from a beautiful soul. AvrgBlkgrl? I think not. ExtraordinaryGiftedWoman! Thank you for sharing. J
Love the writing, the content, the message ... It is wonderfully on spot.
Beautiful, honest and carries an awesome message. No one needs to settle, everyone deserves to be cherished. x
Your talent is so immense that I have difficulty in finding the right words to describe you. Different... amazing... powerful... special... are so inadequate but accurate.
Time and time again, you prove why you're one of my favorite writers here with poems like this that have such a powerful pulse running through them while telling a great story. Beautiful work as always, Regina
why do i have a feeling you're the friend, that all your friends go to for a dose of "real"? awesome, as ALWAYS!
Ok Momma, you told it like it is. Harsh words delivered in a brusque but caring manner. Different, exceptional work
Once again, you stretch style to its limits and charge it with meaning. Excellent poetry, Regina!
Stylistically perfect! Love the tone of this piece. Reminds me of all the conventional wisdom that I didn't appreciate enough while growing up - a story that needed to be told.
A truly marvelous poem. This one is a lot of fun. Excellent writing!
oh,I like this one a lot I would say this has to be one of the best poems you've posted.Give the girl her props.^_^ Very good Av,I like. Excellent.