Join the best erotica focused adult social network now
Login

Palimpsest on You

"A female civilian rewrites a soldier's story."

11
8 Comments 8
247 Views 247
491 words 491 words
Competition Entry: Small Moments

Author's Notes

"Palimpsest definition - text written over text."

Guns have a recoil. I reminisced the impact in your embrace.
You would tell me to aim for center mass,
My eyes flinched, banging
The heart.
I ricocheted into your erection,
Trembling from my ass
Blinded by a flying bullet case.
After using your Ammo,
I glanced at you after
The shot.
Guns don't throb like hearts do.

Earlier today, questioned by your friends, telling tales of the green beret.
I was berated for saying I wanted to make you a barbecue; you smiled, understanding my language.
You lied, telling them you'd take me to the range; they wanted that; they felt so betrayed.
My eyes were zoned, my friends blocked the grenades; you knew I wanted to grill your sausage.

*

You drove on one gear,
I stared at your engine,
While your hand was like a pussy pump glistened.
I was engorged in low tempo, my clit feared
As I stared
The reciprocating motions of your piston.
The suspense... I glared
At the girthed on your thigh, uncomfortably fashioned.
Eye candy for my penchants.

*

You marked your territory on my balcony; I'd have no parking issue; my neighbors were on deck.
I put the pissing contest on ice,
giving you a glass of cognac.
I had just enough time to do my own unconventional warfare.

There were no tall tales, just truth bombs. Your puppy eyes were blood diamonds.
We needed to go synthetic
Visceral
I listened as jewels dropped; half an hour passed, and your comforting hand found a jewel to unplug.
Whimsical, hysterical
We needed to go romantic
Perfect timing
My recommendation
Recreate the noise with a different environment

The neighbors understood my innuendo
My cadets started their buzzcuts.
Flagged in lingerie
Some going commando
...Steam from the bathtub...

Men briefed, everyone understood your dossier
This war of ours
For a new odyssey.

Whisked by a mountain
Silked attire unbutton
Jilled desire buckling.
We didn't make it
to the bed.
I predicted in rapid transit
Kissed
against my giant teddy bear
Sweaty and bare
Released
to your waist
--- size!
---- hips dip
focus!
Cock is
Light sandalwood
Red marshmallow
Glow!
I swallowed the aspect ratio
Gobbling touch throat fellatio
The goat!
Your cadence telling me I'm the greatest!

*

I'm a ballplayer
It's already going on with the neighbors
Head bobbing from the fencing
You lifted me from the hair pulls
Turned around bending
Blasted to my teddy, heart mascot
Knocked straight to my cervix
Goofed face straight to my a-spot.

I grinded, finding your eyes
Ecstatic sighs
Flinging thighs
Complex cries.

The next day, after the sex play
Chilling with your friends
Laid back with your cognac
I animated your exploits; you gave me a look
Narrow choke points, explaining your guerrilla in the bush
Going Kong
Splashes and Ditches
my girls asked how long and how many inches
the guys noticed something wrong and looked at me suspicious
I looked cute.

I got a twenty-one-cannon salute.

Published 
Written by CocoonedPanda
Loved the story?
Show your appreciation by tipping the author!

Get Free access to these great features

  • Create your own custom Profile
  • Share your erotic stories with the community
  • Curate your own reading list and follow authors
  • Enter exclusive competitions
  • Chat with like minded people
  • Tip your favourite authors

Comments