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wicked_jocelyn
3 weeks ago
Bisexual Female, 34
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Quote by seeker4
Yep, when you think about it, Morticia and Gomez were one of the sexiest couples on television. Even today, their restrained yet smouldering passion holds up pretty well. John Astin and Carolyn Jones played it beautifully. Yes, I am a fan from before I really understood how sexy they were.


Apparently the early 1960s series had a lot of BDSM jokes in it. The 1991 movie certainly did.

They were a great couple. Gomez was an energetic, passionate, and gregarious husband. Series role model material there.
Quote by Verbal
Made our engagement rings myself, out of wood, before I proposed.


I like this! It's so amazing that you hand crafted your own rings!
In the before time, we used to swing dance. I dressed him up all goth-a-billy and had my own outfit to match. It was a great Valentine's day.

I miss the before time.
I wouldn't risk it. The image is hot and a little to overtly sexual.

Amazon changes their policies on a whim though. So who knows what's acceptable now.
I cum more easily for oral than penetration. My partner is quite accommodating.

I give a little bit more than I receive and I'm okay with that too.

Most of my male partners do not want to go down on me either after they come inside me either.
Quote by sweetsinnndy
I never went to college but I think I'm pretty smart. I'm just not great at sentence structure and some of the finer points of writing. Would you rather read a story that is hot but may not have great sentence structure, or read a boring or average story that was written really well? I know I get good reviews here so people who read my stories seem to like them. I have 18 more stories to share including my first new story in 16 years, but I will never be good enough in sentence structure or whatever to get posted here.

Was curious about your thoughts.

Thanks,
sindy


If the story isn't there, I don't care how good the sentence structure is. I'm not that big on sentence structure, and I still get compliments on my stories.

Bad grammar makes me cringe, but you're not demonstrating any of that here. Also, you don't have to college to tell a good story. You do have to learn, as we all do. No one said that had to be a four year degree though.
Republicans out of power. If Democrats resolve the crisis, hopefully it will be for good.

Work from home becomes the normalized. Meaning less commute times, less pollution, more time at home.
My Partner's Tommy John Boxers. They're nice and tight on his bum. He looks good in them.
I'd still like to have a sex with a stranger. Mutual strangers you know? As in we'd both be blindfolded throughout it.
No kids. Not now. Not ever. It's pretty much the only way an *individual* can have a significant impact on the world's carbon problem.
There was a thesis I read years back that the monomyth developed, as a story structure, to justify the reign of monarchs. Basically, story tellers told legends of the great bronze age chief or something. I think then there's a lot of baggage about the monomyth that would make it hard to adapt for erotica. Erotica, no matter what, is about relationships. The monomyth, no matter what else can be said about it, about is about a singular (male) hero rising to his full potentional or something. Romance, is therefore a subplot.

Star Wars IV, I think might be a particularly bad example of this. The chosen one goes on his journey, defeats the baddies, and then gets a smile from the beautiful princess because he deserves it now. That's not erotica I would read.

Now, it sounds like I'm being harsh on the Monomyth and to be honest I am. That doesn't mean that I don't think it could work or be sexy somehow. Could I imagine a sexy story in which "the messenger" delivers some important message to the hero, who then undergoes mentorship from "the sage" and is given an "artifact" in the process? Yeah sure. It might be like this. Once upon a time a maid was milking cows in her village when a beautiful fey lord spoke to her that her village could be saved if only she learned to seduce a prince of the Unseelie court. She met another fey woman who taught her that pain was not to be feared, but the stage of pleasure. The milk maid was able to hold the magical scourge, of which no one knows for sure why... yet.

That could be sexy.
Quote by Master_Jonathan
With the demise of tumblr, I am looking for another place (in addition to Lush) in which to write my stories. I had/have all my stories on my tumblr site currently–some of which are also here on Lush, but many have yet to be published here or are too "hot" for Lush. I am looking for another story site in which I can keep them and explore subjects which Lush does not allow. I DID have cover pics with my stories on tumblr until they got a stick up their...
Anyway, I am just wondering if anyone else writes for another story site. I am not leaving Lush, I just like to have my stories backed up and want to explore more "advanced" subject material. Suggestions anyone?


Literotica is a thing, as other have mentioned. It is as described, lots of views, very little in way of community.
Quote by Beffer
No, unless you count one of my FWBs as an 'affair', but my SO's know about it, so it's not cheating.


This needs constant reminding: affairs are not about the sex. Affairs are about the betrayal, the secrecy, and the lies.

You're describing ethical polyamory. I support this.
Quote by MrPassionate
Exorcisism of Emily Rose
Raaz
Ragini MMS
The Exorcist
The Nun


Exorcism of Emily Rose is severely underappreciated.
Quote by Grace


I don't know about anyone else, but I rarely have a choice. I often don't write, I take dictation. My characters tell me what to put. When I am the central character I tell the story from my perspective.

Apparently I, or my characters, reallylike first person. Ten of my eleven stories are first person. The other is written in second person. I wonder if I can write in the third person.


Most of what I write is in first person too and there are still things you can do in third person that can't be done well in first.

If I'm writing from the perspective of a character who wouldn't tell the reader much about his or her inner life, third person works better. My last story was from the perspective of a sociopath, so her sense of identity is pretty muted anyway. Third person worked better there, because the sociopath isn't going to let you in, because there's nowhere to let you into
Quote by WannabeWordsmith
Nice! I often find myself applying this technique (though not eradicating 'I' entirely: it has its place) at the expense of having to find inventive ways to avoid using the passive voice too much.

My standard trick is to comb through the story after I've hammered it down and look for any occurrences of words like:

1) felt / feel
2) heard / hear
3) saw / see

And remove them by rewording that sentence in a more direct manner:

I heard her soft moans and felt myself hardening.

becomes something like:

Her soft moans thrilled me, hardening my cock.




In other words, don't filter. Don't make indirect statements.

"He felt her touch his bicep" is awkward in third person too. Part of what makes first person, in my experience, so prone to indirect statements is the tendency to use want to use "I".

Even stuff like "I felt reassured after that hot sex" could be rephrased as "Nothing reassures me better than that sex."
My Dad was a fairly devout religiously, and he showed me and my siblings "The Mission" so we could understand things about Christianity.

I'll never forget that movie. More so, I'll never forget how great that soundtrack was.
Quote by IMPÜRETHOUGHTS



We most definitely use the number system in LA




How's this for Los Angeles specific: Last time we had a hot server at the bar, we just played a game of "musician, actor, or model." We made a game out of it. We asked him when he returned. Handsome actor. Which meant I lost and had to pay for my friend's cocktail.
Things are... kind of? getting back to normal?

I'm back home and back working, having spent much of quarantine up in Norcal at my parent's guest house.

Some stuff is opening up again, and masks are definitely the new fashion.
Many times. The first time I made out with a girl, I understood men's experience of sex better. Turning on the feminine was a new emotional cocktail. I enjoy perform oral on the right partners.
Quote by LakeShoreLimited


That boom box scene seems rather unlikely. I think a lot of girls would indeed use a garden hose on him.

To digress at bit: some songs that seem to be "romantic" are actually about the frustration of crushes.

An example would be Downtown Train (originally by Tom Waits; Rod Stewart covered it). The narrator of the song is pining for some woman, but she seems to be ignoring him or maybe she barely knows him. He does some mild stalking by going past her house when she doesn't know he's there.

I've done exactly that myself, more than once.


Haven't we all? I think it's okay to be obsessed over someone as long as 1) you know that's what you're doing. 2) You eventually get out of it. 3) Don't show up to their house with the boom box or otherwise be a stalker.

One that note, here's a song from 90s: