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No socks, generally loose clothing. Socks make my feet feel suffocated and likewise, I like to wear a baggy t-shirt or a a large pair of mens boxers to avoid that feeling on the rest of me.
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secretjanedoe
Over 90 days ago
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Quote by gogochan
an "its complicated" choice for marital status
going off this maybe also "engaged" or "it's serious," for more comedy maybe "baby daddy" or "single mom."
The "slut" option made me laugh when I signed up.
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OK, Thank you both I will drastically shorten the intro. One more question: I am, well, kind of proud of the long intro I wrote is there a place you all suggest I put it? Like is there a way to link the "unedited version" from the edited version so people can see what would have been?
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I am currently writing a story that is in the form of a CIA case file and there are a lot of relevant details in the beginning that are formatted like a case file not like a paragraph. Should I remove them? They do make for a rather long sexless intro.