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secondsamuel
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Words that I need more synonyms for at the moment are:
Tentacles. Sprite informs us on another thread that more stories are required on this topic, so I am attempting to fulfil the need. Are they limbs? Arms? Or legs?
Bikini bottom. That's a horrible term anyway. "swimming costume" sounds about 60 years out of date, and "swimsuit" not much better, as well as implying a one-piece.
Fabric. You can say "material" or specify the type of material, maybe "cotton".
So I can write a sentence "The slimy tentacles wriggled all over the flimsy fabric of her bikini bottom", but it gets difficult if you want to write several paragraphs on this theme.
On tentacles. Here's advice I've gave before, because I've written way too many tentacles ask sprite.
so perhaps I'm better off being ignored but if there is a universal lesson, it is when you can't describe something, let the audience imagine while you describe something else. Focus on the characters emotions, you can never go wrong with the violated ick factor,or emphasizing the transition from here is a octopus alien that is doing things to me, to I can't believe I'm enjoying this, very much like a nonconsent story with safety guards up to prevent a reader from actually believing it could happen to them. There's also the action verb, twisting turning, sliding grinding gyrating pulsing, slamming smacking and on and on not saying that you did not do any of these things, The other thought is to compare the monsters to things in the real world, octopuses, squid, come to mind, but also the feel of the phallus like things, are, soft, spindly, giving or rigid or both, it's also an excellent opportunity to involve different shapes and sizes, more volumes of semen or acts like double or triple or however many you want penetration, and sounding, solving advantage of the sex monster, whatever you can imagine.
Or tentacles: tendrils, vine, protrusions, appendages, feelers, arms, phallic-shaped, rope, binds/bonds (bdsm stuff)
So you can focus on what they doing to, like it is fucking, a tentacle is a cock, dick, phallus whatever.
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i'm a huge fan of synonym buns...
I'm a homophoneophobe
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If someone tells me how to insert a photo, I'd love to share a photo of my wife naked at Hippie Hollow.
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Okay so questions on the parameters of this assignment and thank God for limiting me to 2500 words, can the person who is masturbating be watching someone else having sex or would that be breaking the spirit of competition?
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I used to work in an adult bookstore... ask me anything.
My wife and I sucked off a man we met on Fetlife in a booth like that. There's one in Austin we really enjoy, pretty clean, but no glory holes. My favorite one I've ever been in was in Portland, glory holes with rubber around the edges.
My wife and I sucked off a man we met on Fetlife in a booth like that. There's one in Austin we really enjoy, pretty clean, but no glory holes. My favorite one I've ever been in was in Portland, glory holes with rubber around the edges.
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I'm new to the site and I asked the same question. This seems like more of a community than most places, and I do mean that is the highest sort of praise. But when I worked for a newspaper, it was hard, hammered into us that writers and editors do not comment on stories. The thinking was that it discourages the audience from commenting on your article because they are never going to be as good at writing ss you are. I know that sounds tremendously vain, but think about an author who is spent a week or so researching and writing, then some commentor spouts off an opinion, and God bless them, a lot of times, those responses are barely thought out, and there's the writer, waiting to ambush them with the blowtorch. Again, it's apples and oranges, you probably don't get the same back and forth between commentaries here that you would get on say YouTube or after a political article, but I'll admit it's sort of hard wired into me. That and on Literotica, a lot of the comments are profoundly negative you don't dignify them with the response. Haters gotta hate hate hate hate hate
I'll try to respond to my commenters (I always respond to emails) since it does often validate the writing. But I'm also using a talk to text program right now is to post because of the nerve condition, so can be hard on me to write things that aren't longer.
I'll try to respond to my commenters (I always respond to emails) since it does often validate the writing. But I'm also using a talk to text program right now is to post because of the nerve condition, so can be hard on me to write things that aren't longer.
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