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coguy
Over 90 days ago
Straight Male
0 miles · Denver
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A gang bang superbowl Bodies rubbing and grinding with each other. Sweat pouring. No one able to track who is groping and fucking who at any given time. And when a hottie starts to moan and groan as she is about to orgasm, a bunch of guys rush to pin her down and fill her every hole, as their gals grind their pussies on their face. And then this gal managed to slip out from under every one and rush to the door to squirt on the face of her girlie lover, while the guys run after to catch her, shaking their ware and spewing their jizz all over the floor.
LOL ;)
Bodies rubbing and grinding with each other. Sweat pouring. No one able to track who is groping and fucking who at any given time. And when a hottie starts to moan and groan as she is about to orgasm, a bunch of guys rush to pin her down and fill her every hole, as their gals grind their pussies on their face. And then this gal managed to slip out from under every one and rush to the door to squirt on the face of her girlie lover, while the guys run after to catch her, shaking their ware and spewing their jizz all over the floor.LOL ;)
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I don't think I write it for myself or for the readers - the story or poem just happens! I draw inspirations from many places, conversations, incidents and my own fantasies. They float in my mind like globs of paint. Then comes a moment when a faint image starts to appear; I pull the canvas and start painting a picture with broad brushstrokes and fine touches - dipping my brush in those globs of paints that are floating in my head.
For my first submission, "The Stormy Night", the inspiration came from my chats early on with some of the fine "one-on-one chat" conversations I had with some of the members on Lush. One day, a particular profile picture caught my attention that provided the opening line for the poem, and the rest flowed. The responses validated that I did connect at emotional level with quite a few readers, but the votes and viewership is rather pathetic.
"Our Babysitter" was a somewhat humorous rendition of my erotic fantasies. It resonated with a wide range of audience and I was pleasantly surprised, to say the least. Purposefully, I left an opening for follow ups, and readers responded to it, guessing where the story would lead to.
Its prequel, "Our Babysitter - The Beginnings" was my attempt to explore the sensibilities of the "bi-curious" psyche. Being a male, I was nervous if I could do justice to the subject. It did seem to resonate with the target audience, and the response is consistent with the subset of female readers on the site that identify themselves as Lesbian, Bi, or Bi-curious - it did not resonate with a wider audience.
The poem titled "Just For You - Annie" was a poetic response to the nice poem "Just For You - Guys" from Annie Harrison (naughtyannie). It was kind of a personal dialog with her. This poem had a very specific audience - Annie herself. I don't think anyone can appreciate it unless you read both our poems side-by-side ;)
"Pastor's Daughter" was a bold attempt to test my readers. A melancholy ending for an erotica is a kiss-of-death. Even though I could have an alternate happy ending, I knew what I was doing. Shocking the readers was the intent, and by responses I received I know that I succeeded. Everyone who read it and cared to reach out to me to provide feedback, appreciated the plot and rendition, but said they didn't like the ending
All that said, I agree with all the points made earlier in this thread - if your goal is to achieve a high rating, make your erotica truly erotic, pick a subject matter that resonates with a wide (predominantly male) audience, be a female author, and last but not the least, have some truly erotic pictures in your profile ;)
For my first submission, "The Stormy Night", the inspiration came from my chats early on with some of the fine "one-on-one chat" conversations I had with some of the members on Lush. One day, a particular profile picture caught my attention that provided the opening line for the poem, and the rest flowed. The responses validated that I did connect at emotional level with quite a few readers, but the votes and viewership is rather pathetic.
"Our Babysitter" was a somewhat humorous rendition of my erotic fantasies. It resonated with a wide range of audience and I was pleasantly surprised, to say the least. Purposefully, I left an opening for follow ups, and readers responded to it, guessing where the story would lead to.
Its prequel, "Our Babysitter - The Beginnings" was my attempt to explore the sensibilities of the "bi-curious" psyche. Being a male, I was nervous if I could do justice to the subject. It did seem to resonate with the target audience, and the response is consistent with the subset of female readers on the site that identify themselves as Lesbian, Bi, or Bi-curious - it did not resonate with a wider audience.
The poem titled "Just For You - Annie" was a poetic response to the nice poem "Just For You - Guys" from Annie Harrison (naughtyannie). It was kind of a personal dialog with her. This poem had a very specific audience - Annie herself. I don't think anyone can appreciate it unless you read both our poems side-by-side ;)
"Pastor's Daughter" was a bold attempt to test my readers. A melancholy ending for an erotica is a kiss-of-death. Even though I could have an alternate happy ending, I knew what I was doing. Shocking the readers was the intent, and by responses I received I know that I succeeded. Everyone who read it and cared to reach out to me to provide feedback, appreciated the plot and rendition, but said they didn't like the ending
All that said, I agree with all the points made earlier in this thread - if your goal is to achieve a high rating, make your erotica truly erotic, pick a subject matter that resonates with a wide (predominantly male) audience, be a female author, and last but not the least, have some truly erotic pictures in your profile ;)