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I need your help! Please read and RATE my story for the flash erotica competition going on right now! It's called "First Time Lesbians Not in Cars Serving Coffee" by ballstothewall I would really appreciate your VOTE! Thank you!!!!
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ballstothewall
Over 90 days ago
Straight Male, 34
United States
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Hey guys! =) If you get time, could you please read and score my competition story? I really appreciate your help and feedback! Thank you!
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Haha thanks Sarah. I like to believe I think with the big brain quite a bit and I'm always trying to make the girls in my life happy. They come before me. I didn't mean to come off shallow if that's how it sounded. :/ I just really like this girl, in both her attractiveness and personality. I really just want to know how I can make her like both of these regarding me. (Along with the other points I mentioned).
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I'm going on a date with this girl I met on okcupid. She is by far the cutest girl I'll have ever gone out with. I usually have really bad luck with finding girls that are interesting and attractive to me. I really don't want to screw this up. Any advice would be greatly appreciated. Here are the main things I'm interested in:
Compliments on her looks? On what and how far?
Let her pick the movie and restaurant or be more assertive? She's vegan by the way.
I always pay for my first dates.
How to be confident in general and how to not go as far to be cocky. I recently lost 70 lbs but I'm still not a skinny guy. She is super skinny and beyond cute. I'm afraid I won't meet her standards.
What to do to avoid awkward silences. Topics for conversation.
Anything else would be wonderful too. I'm a 22 year old college student by the way and so is she. Thank you in advance.
Compliments on her looks? On what and how far?
Let her pick the movie and restaurant or be more assertive? She's vegan by the way.
I always pay for my first dates.
How to be confident in general and how to not go as far to be cocky. I recently lost 70 lbs but I'm still not a skinny guy. She is super skinny and beyond cute. I'm afraid I won't meet her standards.
What to do to avoid awkward silences. Topics for conversation.
Anything else would be wonderful too.
I'm a 22 year old college student by the way and so is she. Thank you in advance.