If I don't think a story has merit, I don't even finish it, much less rate it and post a comment!
Additionally, since I've been spending so much time on Lush enjoying the talent of others, I haven't established my own bona fides - assuming I have any - as a writer. I think it's called LAAAZYYY!
Thus, I'm reluctant to critique the writing of those whom I may feel are in need of it, since they have no opportunity to evaluate mine.
Massage the cheeks of her ass, get her pussy very wet, spend time running my tongue along and into her wonderfully tight little hole; lubricate her now that she's been carefully prepared, and then slowly, very slowly, enter her with my cock....
Delightfully intimate, with the right person, under the right circumstances, and with the right preparation!
Both usually; alternately, during the same (for lack of a better description) session.
Knowing that a story is biographical makes it especially exciting to me!