I have a story that I would appreciate any help on proofreading.

I, absolutely do! I get so turned on by the pain of my nipples getting squeezed during sex! It’s such a turn on.

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Guys, just curious if you enjoy having your nipples played with during sex? Touched, rubbed, pinched or sucked on?

Looking for a proofreader. Would anyone volunteer to read over my potential submission? Let me know. Thank you.