I love reading stories here on Lush. Single and multi stories BUT there my be a plot to the story. I must not just be sex with this person the sex with that person. The whole story must have a single plot though all the chapters. There must be character building and of course the must be sex but not the same sex the whole time.
I have been reading stories here for quite a few years before I became a member a couple of years ago. The first couple of lines of the story must draw me to read further. Not just I met this guy and now we are having sex. The first couple of lines must be laying out the story. If I don't find that I don't read further single or multi.
If I see a bit of plot building up I will read further. If the second chapter is just the same as the first (first chapter was about sex with a guy and the second chapter was just about sex with somebody else I read no further.
As i said I have been pert of Lust for quite a few years and only now I am writing my first story. Before I started I made sure that I had a plot for the story and yes it is a multi part story. I have laid out the whole story with character development and the development of the plot before I started with sex in each chapter but trying to have different type of sex.
My first chapter is complete. My second is just about ready for submission and I am busy on the 3rd chapter with each chapter ending on something to encourage the reader to read the next chapter to find out what happens next.
Now it is in the fantasy and sci fi category which is not very popular here on Lush but I hope that the readers will enjoy the story.
I hope to have the story finished in a couple of weeks so put it in your reader list and read it then.
Jackrabit
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Hi all
I am very need at this writing stories. I do reread the stories a number of times but it seems I am missing the problems.
I am looking for somebody to read my stories and just mark the mistakes. I will fix them my self.
Please send my a PM if interested.
Jackrabit
I am very need at this writing stories. I do reread the stories a number of times but it seems I am missing the problems.
I am looking for somebody to read my stories and just mark the mistakes. I will fix them my self.
Please send my a PM if interested.
Jackrabit