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Hogwash
Over 90 days ago
Bi-curious Cis Male, 55
0 miles · Rutland

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Quote by Bria_V2
My sister who doesn’t get why I enjoy it but definitely sees the change in me. I have two close friends who live vicariously through me, we meet for lunch every now and then just so they can hear what naughtiness my “friends” and I have been up to...


Did your friends enjoy the first chapter of the story I wrote for you? smile
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My stories are generally accepted without objection by the site. I am working on Chapter 6 of Alphia Corporation, my loving wives/cuckold novel and I need some help finishing it up.

Please take a look at my post work so far. If it trips your trigger, lemme know and I will shoot you over my draft chapter 6. It really is close to final draft quality but I need another set of eyes on it.

Thanks!
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Haha! What the fuck was I thinking? I think I got all the fun bits mixing together all turned around in my mind.
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I am writing a scene and I realized that I have no idea if that particular act has a ‘name’. Anyone know?

It is 69 if it’s your own dick. What is it if it is another guy? 699?
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Max,

Hogwash here, writer of the Alphia Corporation series and other tales of smut and erotica.

I saw your post about writing stories based on ideas from other people.

I have written the start of two stories outside the Sam and Carrie universe and have given up finishing them. One was written at the request of a fan on lush who wanted a story of a housewife taken in her home by strangers. I wrote the setup piece to it, called it chapter 1 and submitted it to lush. The editors rejected it because it seemed to be setting up a fantasy.

I was honestly shocked because that was not how I envisioned the story moving forward but when I read it again I could understand their concerns. I never went back to it.

I also wrote a setup piece about a young couple, just graduated from College, living and working at a renaissance faire where the girls decide to tease and hold out from the guys until closing day ...

Both are well written but mostly at setup stage and I have lost interest in finishing either. I would like to share them with you. If either kicks your muse into gear, let’s talk.

Your thoughts? Shall I send them over?

Thanks.

- Hogwash
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I much prefer reading multi-part stories. I mean, I am not going to read a lousy story whether it is standalone or multi-part, so if I am reading a story it means I am enjoying it. On the rare occasion when the story really loops you in I want to know more about the characters and their experiences in the universe created by the author.

I myself only write multi-part stories because I want to explore the lives of my characters as they navigate their way through my tale.
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If the editor offer is still open, please take a look at my Alphia Corporation series. I have posted Chapters 1-3 and I need help with final edits on Chapter 4.

Thanks.

- Hogwash
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I have published the first three of many chapters of my novel, and I need editorial assistance with my fourth chapter. I have it complete, but I need help fixing the ending and finding whatever little nits exist in the copy leading up to the terrible, awful, horrible no good ending that I have currently written.

I am just stumped and tired of writing and rewriting.

Please take a quick look at my Alphia Corporation stories, Chapters 1, 2 and 3 are up and published on lush stories. If the stories tickle your fancy (or whatever) and you are a good editor, please shoot me a private message and we can see where we go from there.

I have a 12 chapter novel planned and charted out. I am working on chapters 5-8 now but they are not yet ready for an editor's keen eye.

Thank you very much, in advance.

(I'd link the stories already published but I have not yet reached my 20 post requirement before I can submit links inside my forum posts.)

- Hogwash
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My first story of the novel(la) known as "Alphia Corporation" is now up.

https://

Have fun and I hope you enjoy. smile
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Thank you, Hope!

Your post got my imagination going and I just threw this together for you. I like it so much I might just make it into a full on story, but for now it's yours! Enjoy!

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"Damnit," Hope thought as she saw George's taillights disappear around the corner of the wooded drive.

She waved one last time and then shivered against the crisp fall air, shrugged herself into her jacket and trudged back inside the wooded cabin. "It's just not fair. I hate those stupid job emergencies."

She barely noticed the beauty of the dappled maples and oaks around the little cabin that she and George had rented for the next ten days. Inside, it was warm, because of the wood stove burning away happily in the corner. All told, it was not so bad that she had the place for herself for a couple of days. "It will be nice, just to have some alone time," she tried to convince herself.

She closed the door behind her and hung her coat on the hook on the wall. She tried not to notice the empty hook next to it.

Hope sighed again, and took off the boots she'd put on to avoid the mud and grass in what passed for a driveway to this place. It was Thursday, and she and George had been able to score the place for a good price for Thursday, and both weekends. They had been pleasantly surprised that their bid was accepted, given the number of days they were asking for.

Out the window, she could barely see the lovely pond in the back partially obscured by the willow tree, sad looking now as it had dropped most of its leaves in preparation for winter. She thought to herself. "A warm bath, a good book by the fire, a glass of wine, a nice walk by the pond tomorrow ... this is going to work out after all."

The dinner for two that she and George had put together, along with the candles on the table made her sad again for a moment, but she set to cleaning up. As she cleaned up she ate some of the lovely french cheese and the baguette that George had somehow scored in town. The homemade lentil soup and the salad were packed up and went into the old and noisy refrigerator. The apple pie that she had made she put into the cupboard.

She left the two candles burning though. They added a nice light even if they did remind her of the romantic and sex filled weekend that she and George had planned.

An hour later, after her hot bath, and wrapped up in her favorite fluffy towel, Hope curled up in front of the fire with her book and snuggled into her pillow and sighed in contentment. "I could get used to this," she thought to herself, "for a little while. I miss George already."

---

The fire had burned down and the room was slightly cooler. She looked around. No, that was not what woke her up.

She listened drowsily and heard a car door slam. It took her a minute to realize that she was not in the city anymore. A car door slamming was unusual.

It was scary.

George had his phone. Not for the last time - she hoped - she cursed her decision to keep that cheap cell phone carrier. She had no reception this far up in the mountains. Her breath caught in her throat and her eyes darted about. There were only three rooms here: the bedroom, this room and the bathroom. Where could she hide?

She scrambled to her feet as she heard the unmistakable sound of male voices outside ... VOICES! More than one!

She froze, like a deer in headlights. Holding her breath, she listened intently. "Please ... please!" she whispered to herself, but she did not hear a single female voice. The men were laughing and joking around. Their car was evidently right outside, and there was no other place they could possibly be coming to ... except this cabin!

"Oh, George!" She pleaded silently. "Help me!"

But George was a hundred miles away, unknowing of her predicament. And even if he did know, what could he do?

She started to panic, and gave a squeak as she realized that she was naked beneath her fluffy towel.

"Dude!" she heard a deep voice say. "This place is fucking awesome! And you got it for this weekend, right Drew?"

"Haha, yeah! It belongs to a friend of mine. His wife rents it out from time to time, but its free this weekend, and we get the whole fucking place to ourselves!" Drew answered.

"It sounds just like that trip we took back in college," a third voice said, stamping his way up the steps with his mates.

"Not quite," Hope heard the first man drawl. "I brought a couple of college sluts up to the mountains for us to play with!"

The keys jingled as they worked the lock. She felt as though she could feel her every breath and every heartbeat. Time seemed to stand still, and then the door burst open and the three men, younger men in their 30s looked like, stumbled into the room.

For a moment, but for the soft sound of the fire in the wood burning stove behind her, you could have heard a pin drop.

"You sonofabitch!" Drew said in an awestruck voice, looking at the first man with wonder and amazement. "No wonder you said no wives! You got us a hot MILF to fuck all weekend!"

Hope's mouth opened in shock and her eyes went wide. "A MILF to Fuck?" She thought to herself, stunned.

The third man punched the first man in the shoulder. "You are the best!" He shucked off his boots and tore his shirt off to reveal a muscular chest and firm abs. "I'm first!" He announced, striding confidently towards Hope who started to protest. "What? Wait .. wait ... wait a min --!"


-- Scene fades to black --

[Female voice, commanding tone] "Stop!"

...

[Sounds of clothes being quickly discarded]
[Female voice, pleading tone] "Please?"

...

[Sound of a woman being thoroughly kissed]
[Female voice, pleasure] "Oohhhh my ..."


(You can fill in the rest, Hope! - Enjoy!)

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All,

I am writing an erotic novel called Fun Times in which two engaged college students decide to go an extended no holds barred sex cruise as one last fling before graduation, marriage, jobs, etc.

I have written 80+ pages and have posted three of the four parts of the prologue - an extended introduction to the female lead - and the first chapter of the story itself.

If you are at all interested in well written cuckold/wife sharing stories, please give it a read. If it trips your trigger and you are interested in helping me out, please shoot me a lush mail message.

Thank you.

https://

(the third part of the prologue and Chapter one of the story itself is still being reviewed by the moderator. I expect they will be up in the next day or so.)