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1 day ago
Bi-curious Male, 53
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Hi All, I have written my first story but it'd been declined twice due to quality, I have a slight problem, I really can’t see the problems with it to fix, comma splices and paragraph run on's ??. Spell check has sorted the spelling problems, but being mildly dyslectic, I can’t see the other problems to fix them. It looks fine to me. Please help.
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When i was in junior school (i was about 8/9) to get out of a detention class i climbedinto the ceiling, needless to say i fell right through and broke my ankle
I have a scar on the palm of my hand that goes half way up my thumb, sliced it open on the front sight of a gun.
I have a bb lodged in my knuckle, a realy long story to this, so as short as possible, someone brought in a loded co2 bb if for repair, i picked it up and it went off, needlesss to say the gun was not repaired and the person left never to return.
I have been bent twice in 26 years of diving, something that is realy not nice, and extremly painfull, not recomended, i make sure i do extra deco now just to be sure.
I have a scar on my bicep, and when people ask about it i tell them it is knife actually i did it working on a car, the fan kicked in and took a chunk out of me
This list could go on and on, so i'll stop here.
I have a scar on the palm of my hand that goes half way up my thumb, sliced it open on the front sight of a gun.
I have a bb lodged in my knuckle, a realy long story to this, so as short as possible, someone brought in a loded co2 bb if for repair, i picked it up and it went off, needlesss to say the gun was not repaired and the person left never to return.
I have been bent twice in 26 years of diving, something that is realy not nice, and extremly painfull, not recomended, i make sure i do extra deco now just to be sure.
I have a scar on my bicep, and when people ask about it i tell them it is knife actually i did it working on a car, the fan kicked in and took a chunk out of me
This list could go on and on, so i'll stop here.
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Quote by sigh
Nice to know I am not the only one that feels this way. I deleted my Facebook account about a year ago and feel the better for it. If I want to contact people I can and I don't need to hear about their latest find of belly button fluff.
But if you like it, live it and enjoy.
Me too, I agree, i deleted mine so long ago i cant remember, i couldnt be arsed with every one arguing with each other.
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I know this might be a strange question to ask but, how do you know if you have dyslexia ? This is not a wind up, i am being totally serious. Is there a test or something you can take ?
the reason i am asking is, a few weeks ago i had a friend to sort out my cctv and computer in my shop, it took him about three days in total, while he was here working he noticed a lot of things about my behavior and exellent writing skills( my handwriting looks as though i am writing with 5 broken fingers, and sometimes i cannot even understand what i have written myself). He himself, his brother and Mother have dyslexia, and his brother also has, i cant honestly remember what he called it, but its when you cant concentrate and get side tracked easily and easily distracted.
Which he said is exactly what i do !!!! He asked if i had ever been tested for any of them, i replied no theres nothing wrong with me.
Having thought more about it, and he knowing a lot more than me about these things, makes me think, i cant spell, i cant count, i am havent got a clue without a calculator (great when you sell things for a living) , i miss letters out of words and sometimes whole words out of sentances, i have a very short attention span and my mind just wanders off, i will start one job then go on to start another 3 or 4, and then remember about the first, but the biggest problem i have is reading, i try to read a lot, but cant read fiction books, and where it takes most people 2 days to read a book it will take me at least 2 weeks, i'v always just put this down to being a slow reader ?
After reading these posts though, i dont think i have a problem with colours, unless i'v just adapted unknowingly.
So if anyione knows of a web site that has some sort of test, please can you let me know. Thanks
the reason i am asking is, a few weeks ago i had a friend to sort out my cctv and computer in my shop, it took him about three days in total, while he was here working he noticed a lot of things about my behavior and exellent writing skills( my handwriting looks as though i am writing with 5 broken fingers, and sometimes i cannot even understand what i have written myself). He himself, his brother and Mother have dyslexia, and his brother also has, i cant honestly remember what he called it, but its when you cant concentrate and get side tracked easily and easily distracted.
Which he said is exactly what i do !!!! He asked if i had ever been tested for any of them, i replied no theres nothing wrong with me.
Having thought more about it, and he knowing a lot more than me about these things, makes me think, i cant spell, i cant count, i am havent got a clue without a calculator (great when you sell things for a living) , i miss letters out of words and sometimes whole words out of sentances, i have a very short attention span and my mind just wanders off, i will start one job then go on to start another 3 or 4, and then remember about the first, but the biggest problem i have is reading, i try to read a lot, but cant read fiction books, and where it takes most people 2 days to read a book it will take me at least 2 weeks, i'v always just put this down to being a slow reader ?
After reading these posts though, i dont think i have a problem with colours, unless i'v just adapted unknowingly.
So if anyione knows of a web site that has some sort of test, please can you let me know. Thanks
looks a bit like rugby, but with huge amounts of body armour and helmets !!!!! whats up with all the gear guys ???????? lol
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Quote by BlackestNight
not much for five bucks
its not even two gallons of gas these days
$5.00 sounds and looks better than £3.50
And two gallons of gas, you lucky lucky person you, we get about 2.5 LITRES of gas for that in the UK and now they'r on about putting an extra 3p extra tax a litre on again.
So for $5 i'll sing and dance naked in the rain,,,, but then again i'd do that for free anyway lol