The story was actually written as a request by two Italian girls I know. I had hoped to be able to keep the Italian for a bit of foreign flavour. Lush admin asked for a translation to accompany story but made no mention of not being able to use Italian in the story. I guess I am going to have to supply a translation, which looks crappy or rewrite it out for the most part.
Her friend's eyes widen as she mumbles quickly, in Italian, to her friend. The words flow so fast that the only word I make out is 'Vancouver'. She looks at me before continuing in her mother tongue. I can only observe and hope that she'll explain once she's done...
This sounds best I think. Thanks.