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I'd love to take a look and hopefully help my love

Hi,

Thank you for your offer. I apologise for the delay in replying. I got a bit disappointed and fed up with the story being returned.

However. I thought what the hell and revamped the story. I am just a bloke. No degree. Just a secondary school education. I did spend 24 years in the Army, and went through their education system. But as my company clerk once told me. I write how I talk.

Would be grateful if you could read my story. Please send details of how to send it to you.

Many thanks

G xx.

Hi, I’m looking for an editor to go over a story. I have submitted it twice. It comes back with, punctuation, making it flow, speech marks in the right place, layout and identifying who is talking. I have put a lot of time of time into this. Though I go through the process of changing it. The story never seems up to standard. I have read other people's stories to try and get an idea of what is required. But I must be missing something. This is my first attempt a writing.