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ChrisPowell68
Over 90 days ago
Straight Cis Male, 56
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I've been having fun on a Spanking Role Play server: https://discord.gg/NBrfGn

Discord is a discussion app for gamers. If you come on over to "Spank Me," you'll need to create a character, have it approved by the mods, then post in Role Play requests with the kind of scene you're looking for.

Over there, I'm Dr. Pyledriver, offering bare-bottomed behavior modification therapy to female adults and teens.


Open again for new members. I have a lot of fun there.
I've been having fun on a Spanking Role Play server: https://discord.gg/NBrfGn

Discord is a discussion app for gamers. If you come on over to "Spank Me," you'll need to create a character, have it approved by the mods, then post in Role Play requests with the kind of scene you're looking for.

Over there, I'm Dr. Pyledriver, offering bare-bottomed behavior modification therapy to female adults and teens.
I joined fetlife about the same time I joined Lush. I figured it might be a good place to promote my Lush writings, but I've found a couple of interesting opportunities to stretch my writing muscles.

One is DM role play. In an erotica-writing group, I met a woman who said she wanted a good writer to role play with. I wrote a scenario (I'm an evil sheriff who kidnaps hot chicks passing through his isolated mountain community to see as sex slaves. She's my latest victim.) I'm enjoying it a lot as we switch off portions of the story. So far she's letting me lead, but I hope she throws me some curve balls along the way.

Another opportunity from the group: a woman was seeking someone to write a story for her. Her particular kink is to have a young black woman seduce a white handyman who's working for her fiance. I'm doing all the work on this one, but I've having fun because I never thought about writing an interracial story. I'll post it on Lush when I'm done.

Anybody else role playing or writing by request?
Adam Schiff. I was going to turn on some music while I work, but Schiff's golden voice is working for me.
"I Keep My Fingers Crossed"
I love how this song turns in on itself. Is it about a hitman who wants to be an actor or an actor who's playing a hitman?

Speaking of goof Lush stories, "1917" tells the story of a French prostitute servicing a doomed soldier. Olney posted several versions of this when the movie of the same name was released.

"Postcard from Mexico": Pure noir. Throw in a red-hot sex scene, and it would be a great story for Lush.

The great singer-songwriter David Olney fell silent and drooped his head last night while singing at a festival in Florida. A doctor in the audience tried to save him, but Olney was gone. I'm gonna post some of his music here. Anybody else out there who loved him, please join in.

"Vincent's Blues" is about Vincent Van Gogh.

With fiction grammar always takes a back seat to the voice of the narrator. Creating a relatable voice sometimes means conforming to how people talk, which is rarely grammatical.

That said, I'm finding that I make a lot more errors when I'm writing erotica. I was working on a story tonight and looked back to see I'd typed "title little ass" and "butt checks."
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I've written stories before, but never anything of an erotic nature. I'm worried that anything I produce will come across as naive or ill informed, so I was wondering if anyone could give me some advice on how to bring across the best experience for the reader. Thank you in advance


Welcome! I've only been here briefly myself. I've found Lush to be a friendly place with lots of encouragement. The wide variety of story genres on the home page demonstrates that everyone is welcome (with only a couple of exceptions in the story guidelines).

Imagination goes a long way. I actually published an erotic story or two when I was a virgin. Of course, writers can learn a lot by reading the works of others. There are thousands of stories here and many ways to access them.

I'm happy to talk privately. Feel free to PM me.
When I was in grad school, my girlfriend and I did it in my office (which I shared with two other guys, neither of which came by). She was bent over looking out a 12th floor window.
Pictures of women masturbating at pornpics. I was looking for a banner for a story I'm writing.
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I think I screwed that up and I don't see a delete option.
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When I was submitting an early version of one of my stories the Lush moderators bounced it back more than once because I wrote out the text messages. They insisted they be treated the same as dialogue and punctuated. I still think it makes it clumsy writing.


Does anyone know if the mods still feel that way?
I don't get aroused by reading my own work, but I'm red hot while writing them. It's a really intense experience as I feel like I'm living the story as the words flow onto the page.
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When you are writing a story and want to include the text of a letter, notice, or a text message on a phone, how do you write it? I thought about italicizing it, but then how do you differentiate between the text message and your character's thoughts? I have a story where a character gets a text on her phone then thinks Who is this from? How do I write so my readers can tell text from thought?


Working on that myself. I've got a story in the works (started before I found Lush) which is about a woman sitting in a cafe writing an erotic story on her laptop. However, someone has hacked in and starts messaging her about the story. So there is 1) my narration, 2) the story she's writing, and 3) the texts back and forth. In my draft, I had boldfaced the user names in the messages (which came through on a test post) and offset her story an inch on both sides (that didn't work on my test).

I was thinking of italicizing the story the character is writing.



The tale of a French Prostitute and a WWI soldier written by David Olney, covered by Emmylou Harris and Linda Ronstadt.